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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Great Chapter, You re really getting much better. Good job...I luv ur story so do please update soon.~You have a great potential to be a great writer. Im now starting to be ur loyal fan right now..hehe..(gives you a chocolate chip cookie~yum..
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do post the side fic...
there is somethins spesial about this story, I can not deside if I want Sasuke to change or not.
I only know I wish for Sasuke and Naruto to be happy together, with or without a child. but he does act more and more like a woman, so in the end I think he will have the sex-change thing, but if he does, you must remember to write a little about what other people will think about it since you mentioned it in the beginning of the story.
now for some pin points, can you desribe things a little more, take the beautiful black kimono, why is it so beautiful? does it have any spesial patterns? ect... an your chapters are to short, call me naggy but I want more to read...
hope you will update soon (^_^)V
there is somethins spesial about this story, I can not deside if I want Sasuke to change or not.
I only know I wish for Sasuke and Naruto to be happy together, with or without a child. but he does act more and more like a woman, so in the end I think he will have the sex-change thing, but if he does, you must remember to write a little about what other people will think about it since you mentioned it in the beginning of the story.
now for some pin points, can you desribe things a little more, take the beautiful black kimono, why is it so beautiful? does it have any spesial patterns? ect... an your chapters are to short, call me naggy but I want more to read...
hope you will update soon (^_^)V
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I can't wait to see what happens *grins* would Sasuke really be hot as a chick well I'll ponder this......I guess there wouldn't be to much of a change.........He's kind of chickish now but would that still be YAOI.......hum........I'll reseach this*jumps up and down* YA new quest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story~keep up the good work.Though I encourage you to work on Sasuke attitude a bit more. He seems really OOC..But dont worryabout that, ur story is going along fine....update soon~~`
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had found this story once on FF.net and sadly I never reviewed. I'm glad that it is being archived here as well, as this place is a little easier to go through finding things.
Also, very interesting concepts! I cannot wait to read more!
Also, very interesting concepts! I cannot wait to read more!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting concept! ^^ Don't let Sasuke get too soft! Imagine the humiliation he may feel at the festival! Can't wait to read more!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!!!!!!! Why don't he just use the Sexy jutsu thingy (I can spell that >.<) that way he could just be a girl for a little wile and not worry about lossing his cock??? An update would be fun!!!!!!!!!!
-The Update Monster
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