rate_review Reviews

not a bad story, some parts really sound like the characters of the show, i do hope that you continue it.

minor spelling mistakes were noticeable but who am i to complain i know i screw it up too from time to time, you might want to get it going a little bit faster thou, some parts of the story did feel like it was being dragged on.

over all i say its a good one

Great! Update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next!

lmfao naruto going to end up getting raped all girl village lol

Please update again soon. Thanks.

DUUUUDE why's it been so long since you updated?? i mean, i'm not sure where i should put this in my fic inventory. normally i'd put it in my SQUEE section, since it made me squee, but you haven't updated in SO LONG....i'll put it there anyway. WHEN you decide to continue the fic, email me, so i'll know, ok? my email is deannathx@comcast.net

it was a good story but i was hoping for a naruto/hinata ff

man it has been a long time, where is the update man, I've been waiting forever, don't let this story die please

really good, but you need to do a little more Reserch first. Neji Went on 1 or 2 missions after the search for sasuke. Please update soon!

So far I'm loving it, I'm one for fluff, and romance rather than just smutty stuff, I am really enjoying the love triangles and the swooning ovr him, and I must say your vision of naruto is sooo much more different than anyting I've ever thought or heard of, couple that with Luna, (I don't remember her from the series, so I'm guessing she is a unique character inspired by you) if she is an OC from your head, I'm pretty impressed you managed to integrate her so well into the world of naruto. kepp the chapters coming, and when you do decide to do the smutty stuff, make it last longer than 2 paragraphs, I find it annoying when someone writes them starting to have sex only to have 2 sentences later them already finishing, its an adult site make it more adult lol, anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more, I have the story marked in my favs so I'll be checking back, yay for good old romance, fluff, and comedy. And naruto must get tired of spending a half hour or so washing all that hair!! 0__0 lol, you have me reading more and more cuz I wanna know who he finnaly ends up with or if he gets a kunai in his head from a jealous love, lol I look forward to reading about Anko raping him or something, there really isn't enough Anko/naruto stuff on here, I don't know I just find them to be a cute pairing

this is AWESOME! I cant wait until the next Chapters!!!!!!