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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good finish it up so i can read the end.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please upload the other 7 chapters I loved your work and even if you chose to discontinue it please leave it up for archive purposes or e-mail me a copy thank you
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY SUCKS, U TOOK NARUTO, MADE HIM LOOK LIKE A WANNA-BE LOSER THEN RAPPED IT UP IN SOME CRAPPY ASS STORYLINE... GOD U SUCK... THEN U SAY TERRORIST NINJA....OMFG UR A LOSER... STICK TO READING STORYS CUZ U SURE AS HELL CANT WRITE THEM
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter, and its been pretty long since you've updated. I really hope you don't stop this story, it's excellently written, along with the ongoing plot. I'm having a blast reading this in the dead of night.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice update soon
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you ever going to update on either ff.net or mediaminer.org or here because its been a long time since youve update and it would be nice of you to throw us some info here. like werther your dead, dropped the story or are just really busy. either one i would just like to know.
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update please, it's a good story.
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March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleasse post the next chapter,.. PLEASeeee
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well i kinda like ur story but ur making naruto sound like the greatest pimp in the world. personely his my favrite character but what makes cool is that his a dumbness and the fact that he can always surpass people . also relax about naruto and his body his not the strongest bo out there and his not that deasel. however its ur story and what u do with it is ur problem but thats just my advice. good luck on the end.BUY
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KEEP writing! Keep continuing! You have a kick ass story going on here, and i'll be damned if you don't continue! UPDATE