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by Yoru

person WickerWood
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SO SO SO hot...I LOVE you for writing that! Everything was written so smoothly...~_~

Your choice of descriptive words gets a thumbs up, and I have to tell you that it was the most well-written/sensual Sandcest PWP I've ever read. Now...to convince you to write a seperate GaaTema oneshot that's not in drabble format, has a lead-up to the lemon, and has dialogue and all that yummy stuff...XD If you do that, then my soul is yours~!

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person WickerWood
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Oh MAN..."Want" was the hottest one of them all...Gaara/Temari is my OTP, and I think you gave it a hotness with that little drabble that out-does every other GaaTema fic I've ever read. *__* Congrats to you! I would die of happiness should you decide to write anymore of that pairing...here or in another fic, it's ALL good. ^_~

Awesome job.