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Nooooo there are no more chapters.
Why are the chapters gone?!

Need to know how it ends. Please update.

saddly i see it has been over 2 weeks since you have updated but i happen to love this tale and am waiting for you to finish it i hope RL lets you have the time and i look forward to more chapters

... I'm impressed... this is one of the best stories I've read so far, if not the best.
Your way of writting is captivating. I just couldn't stop myself, I read all the published chapters in one go!
I'd like to know sasuke's point of view though it would be interesting. I think you handled Naruto's pregnancy really well which is great! I hope you plan on giving Gaara some love too (just not from Naruto), poor thing he deserves it.
I can't wait to read the next chapter! I would tell you to update soon but I know it always irks me when someone says that to me since I know I always update as soon as I can. So... Do your best! I sure as hell will be waiting!

Hi. God firstly I wanted to kill you for making me belive that this was a gaaraxnaruto. I was so afraid 'cause I want Sasuke and Naruto to get toghether. They have to get togheter.
I love this fic, probably more then I should. You have me hooked and I love you for it.
Great, Great work. Love it.

there's only two Naruto stories that I read. Only two that I can even stomach. this is one of them. I adore it, honestly. I think you're a brilliant author. I really wish you would update. I really want to know what happens next. D=

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**deep beath**
n_____________________________________n **grin**

wow.
I love it! I love the story, I love the pace at which things are developing, I love that Sasuke and Naruto didn't just kiss and make up, I love the additional conflict that Gaara posed, that aside from understandable changes in Naruto you've kept true to the spirit of friendship and devotion that the anime/manga is so keen on presenting and that you didn't make everyone OOC. Love that sasuke's still his own jerk self (and the moments where he kept being interupted every time he wanted to talk to Naruto, frustrating but effective)! XD I love the way you write and I love how you have things 'happen'.
<3

So, I was lucky enough to have 15 chap. to eat up all at once, but man, it's gonna be worth it for the rest.
Can't wait to read what happens next!
The thing with the Konoha villagers - You've made it almost palatable, and the conflict with the elders just adds to a really ugly problem (right at the roots). I'm a sucker for mpregs, and after reading a TON of them, I'm really elated when I find one that's well thought out and written.

And just so I'm completely honest, I SEROUSLY think someone should take the plunge and REALLY help kick-start the Uchiha clan. **wink wink nudge nudge** I mean, one baby is a great start, but where's the challenge?? lol
I can't help suggesting it. Sorry~ **not sorry**
X9
Any way things go, I look forward to readin' it.
Awesome job.
**BIGGGGHUUUUGGG**

OMG! I love this story! It's so good and you left it at such an opportune moment. I want to know what Naruto chose! What happened to chapter 16? I'd really love to read it. And the ones after. I hope nothing bad happened to you. I will cross my fingers and keep an eye out. It's such a fabulous story. It deserves to be finished.

lovely darling!
absolutely stunning
can't wait for the next chapter to go up~!

I love the way the plot developed and how in character everybody is! Although Shikamaru hasn't said how troublesome it all is yet! I can't wait for the next chapter, so update soon please.

This is rather good, a new and interesting twist on an almost over-played base plot. Few minor sentence errors, mostly just two words next to each other getting switched in the lost chapter or so, nothing to interrupt the flow of the story.