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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!
I loved this chapter!! A kawaii baby boy! who will he look aliike? More like Sasuke,or more like Naruto!!
You are taking to long T.T. i wanna read the next chapter!!!
How will he react? And Sasuke? I'm going crazy trying to imagine how the next chapter will be!!
And names for the chibi:
Ryohi(the good and the evil), Risu, Ozora(open sky), Takato, Makoto, Riku, Kyto,Hijiri(genius), Akira, Deunan, Kaneda, Tetsuo, Gou, Touya, Yukito, Okami(wolf),Kansho(hot and cold), Karyoku(warm), Raimei(sound of tunder), Sanga(nature), Takaho, Yasu, Hide, Yodo, Miru... Here i hope it helps for the update to come faster^^
I loved this chapter!! A kawaii baby boy! who will he look aliike? More like Sasuke,or more like Naruto!!
You are taking to long T.T. i wanna read the next chapter!!!
How will he react? And Sasuke? I'm going crazy trying to imagine how the next chapter will be!!
And names for the chibi:
Ryohi(the good and the evil), Risu, Ozora(open sky), Takato, Makoto, Riku, Kyto,Hijiri(genius), Akira, Deunan, Kaneda, Tetsuo, Gou, Touya, Yukito, Okami(wolf),Kansho(hot and cold), Karyoku(warm), Raimei(sound of tunder), Sanga(nature), Takaho, Yasu, Hide, Yodo, Miru... Here i hope it helps for the update to come faster^^
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know what narutos reaction is to everyone being there! update sooner! I can't wait!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Great story!! To be honest at first i was dubious about the plot but man i got sucked in quick. I'm really anxious to see what Naruto's reaction will be to everything when he wakes up, especially seeing Sasuke there, and how willingly he seems to accept his role as father. I also hope Naruto goes easy on poor Shikamaru...I think Naruto should make Sasuke work to gain him back though after all he's been through! Gaara's been so good to him...
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg the story keeps me hooked. you should have it so naruto 'has/must' marry gaara though it'd be so, i can't even think of a word for it.!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE AT LEAST!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOO AHHHHHAHAAAAAAAAA
Great chappie! I can't wait to know what happens! MORE!
eagerly wait for your update and take your time.......
LOL!
Great chappie! I can't wait to know what happens! MORE!
eagerly wait for your update and take your time.......
LOL!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke might make things hard on Naruto. We know he cares, but caring about a person doesn't make you kind to a person. I wasn't expecting Team 7 to get pulled in so quickly! I knew Shikamaru would go for Tsunade, and I was hoping Sakura might be brought along, but I hadn't guessed that Sasuke and Kakashi would find out so soon! I'm glad that Kakashi's there with Sasuke; he can be a positive influence when Sasuke's with Naruto.
You've done a great job writing Shikamaru. Early on his character identified that Naruto had no goals now, and the way he beleived he should have contacted Tsunade earlier is right on. The explaination for the pregnancy was very beleivable! Especially the part about the baby usually being premature since there's not enough room to keep growing.
Now, what's Naruto going to do when he sees the rest of Team 7?
You've done a great job writing Shikamaru. Early on his character identified that Naruto had no goals now, and the way he beleived he should have contacted Tsunade earlier is right on. The explaination for the pregnancy was very beleivable! Especially the part about the baby usually being premature since there's not enough room to keep growing.
Now, what's Naruto going to do when he sees the rest of Team 7?
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so he really did know ^_^!!
Freakin awesome chapter <3!!! Cant wait for more!!!
Freakin awesome chapter <3!!! Cant wait for more!!!
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz put more up soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh and if you need help with name *you said you didnt now what to name the kid* just email me!i can help!but anywhoo i love this story!
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oichi, how about that as a good name, i don't know i always wanted to name my kind that once i have one hope others give you some better feedback than mine. Oh by the way the story is great
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've probably named the baby. But you could always name the baby after Sasuke's or Naruto's fathers.
Waiting eagerly for your next update.
Waiting eagerly for your next update.