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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person John Scott
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story so far. It's a very good one at that. I can't wait to see what happens next, and how sasuke and naruto will end up living. You're doing a good job. :)
person Deviation101
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is awesome. Seriously, I can't wait for the next one out. You're doing a terrific job here, I am so excited to see whats next.
person Lanier
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awe, that was such a touching chapter. I am hopeful that Sasuke doesnt act like an ass and do something to chase naruto away. I cant wait to see the next chapter.
person snow_angel
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story has been amazing, i do hope to read the next chapter at the end of the week pls update soon! I'm sad to see it ending but at the same time i want to read more! i might even read it over again when you finish it. lol i really did like it that much. pls update soon, i really like your story i think it's great, good plot/storyline/everything! thx!
person Shinigami24
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* Tsuande-YOU forgot Naruto HEARD you arguing with hte baka council! Naruto WON'T want to lose his child and be locked up for the rest of his life! And does Gaara plan on marrying naruto? That option might prevent Naruto from being dragged back to Leaf against his will...
person DeadlySakura15
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so good i was jsut reading this story alittle while ago and now the new chapter has come out its very good by the way oh can i suggest a name for the baby how about Eichi i love that name its from a very cool anime i watched a few months ago any way please update soon i really love this story^^..
person peppymint
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about something connected to the weather, a name that meant firestorm would be perfect.
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the boys name Keitaro.
person DeityOfDeath
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::Sniffles:: That was soo....good. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
person darkmousy
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot, so glad for the update!!! nicely done with how they all found out. and glad it all happened in one chapter. sasuke claiming his son and admitting to sleeping with naruto seemed anticlimatic in a way that it made me chuckle. or i guess, i just pictured him saying it as "yeah, it's mine, we did that the other day", lol. this is the first mpreg fanfic i really enjoy. it's really well written and that's definitely a factor to keep me reading. XD