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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person leelee
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was soo cool when is the baby going to be born i want twins girl and boy that would be soo cool
very wild dont you think
person lulu
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
would you update this week?
i'm looking for it! please keep writing, i love this fiction!
person D/H
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully you'll have Susuke in the next chapter and the baby born soon..Hopefully, it's a boy!!!

Great story so far!!
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I thought this chapter was great despite the fact that it always seems like your chapters are way too short, although I think that’s more my own problem that something you need to worry about. I'll admit though at first I was disappointed that you revealed to Naruto that Sasuke isn’t married, but then you added in the part about Sasuke wanting his clan to end with him and that was even better. That is a plot twist that was perfect for this point in the story. It keeps the story interesting instead of the same boring thing over and over again. I eagerly await your next chapter. After all you did leave us with a cliff hanger and those are truly terrible for those that are addicted to this story, and I’m sure I’m not just speaking for myself either.


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person naruto-sama
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit i cant wait till the next chapter
person Gwynhafra
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I just love MPregs. Hope that you'll update soon. Can't wait. ^^ . Hope that Sasuke would find out about this sooner or later.
person K.C.
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story... and I'm glad about this update... I hope to read soon the new chapter... I want to know what happens^^
person DeityOfDeath
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue~!!!!!! I LOVE this story~! What happens next?
person Shingo the Pest
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is he going into labor?! But he doesn't have a bloody doctor, he can't deliver the baby! Will they call Takafumi? Will they call Tsunade? Will they call Sakura? What Konoha ninja are there right now? Is Sasuke there?!
person tortilla lady
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please let me know when another chapter comes out!!!!