schedule
August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! Naruto's having pains. Not good. Go get Tsunade! Is Sasuke at the festival? I must know what happens! Update soon!
schedule
August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOO! You cant stop there! That was so cruel. I have to know what happens to Naruto. *sigh* Well great chapter anyway.
schedule
August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update?
YOU ARE DRIVING ME MAD HERE!
><
YOU ARE DRIVING ME MAD HERE!
><
schedule
August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hershalleyebeegurl@yahoo.com
ok, seriously, update soon or i will do something bad to you involving a spork, duct tape, an dthe deep dark depths of my closet
><
ok, seriously, update soon or i will do something bad to you involving a spork, duct tape, an dthe deep dark depths of my closet
><
schedule
August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a really really really good story!!! I recomend that you update as soon as possible!
I can't wait for more. Also for sasuke to find out....more pwease? pweety pwease?
more drama! LOL hope to read soon. I'll review!
I can't wait for more. Also for sasuke to find out....more pwease? pweety pwease?
more drama! LOL hope to read soon. I'll review!
schedule
August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the story's amazing so far. i can't wait to read the next chapter.. or to finally read the part when sasuke and naruto meet. i hope it'll happen soon! the story made me cry more than once, and i think it's enough of a prove that you're a good author, so please keep up the good work :).
schedule
August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please update!!!
schedule
August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, ready for some constuctive critism? Here it goes: You have some spelling errors here and there. Like 'what' instead of 'want'. It's some small mistakes, but they're there. Oh, well. And now on to the compliments! I absolutely ADORE, no LOVE this story!! *Falls on knees and loves* The way you describe the persons, how they feel, think, and so on. You make them so alive. They're very much in character, where alot of people make them... OCC's kind of. Keep up the great work (soon)!!
- MiniMew
- MiniMew
schedule
August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I did say that Ill bug you right?! Please update as soon as you can! I know is hard to write a chapter. because I write myself, but I also know how anxious readers get when they are waiting for a new chapter of a great history!
schedule
August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update... Now, I can't believe how addicted I am... Please update! ASAP! And I promise, I'll love ya forever! =)