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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Luthien Wildglen
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must admit that many a time I saw your fic and many a time decided not to read it. However after finally reading your fic I have concluded it is nothing short of addicting. I must say that even though I consider myself a very open minded person, I was taken back a little by the male pregnancy concept. However I realize now that the concept only proved to make the fic even more addicting. I commend you for taking a hard concept and making it into a story that not only I, but others as well can’t get enough of. I also wanted to inform you that I like the idea of a time jump. You have very good instincts for your writing. After so much praise I must balance it with one question and possible a suggestion. Do you have a beta? Regardless, I hope you update soon.
person Nick
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo, this is a good story and i like it I hope you do the next one soon.
person O___O
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
email in case it's hidden) hershalleyebeegurl@yahoo.com

ok, just let me say first that i already read the whole story so far, but i couldn't find where to review, until i went back. Ok, so now i must say, I LOVE YOU PERSON WHOM I KNOW NOT! your story is awesome. The best. Actually, it's the only yaoi fic i read so far because, well, recently i just started getting into it, mostly because of NaruSasu amv's i see on Youtube.com
*great website, check it out*
o.O and i got over mah phobia...hence why i read your story. Did i say it awesome? Oh i did? Well then, let me say it once more.
I LOVED YOU FIC ABSOULUTELY LOVED IT! AND IT'S ROCKS ! YOU ROCK!
ok, ttfn,
ta ta 4 now.
Ciao baby! (it's mah thing, don't flatter yourself)
Bee
person ladyfiend
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely as usual! please update soon, i'm dying to read what happens next!!
person D/H
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story and hope to read more of it...Oh, and please have the baby'z gender as 'male,' if you could..
person lain-trigger01
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shikamaru I love you!!! Naruto-chan is so cute ne? He'll be alright for now, he just needs to make sure that Sasuke does not find out or else he'd try to get Naruto back regardless of whether that will start a war between Konoha and Sand. Wonder how Sasuke-chan is doing? Please do update soon, we grovel at your feet.
person I'm Me For A Reason
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW I LOve this story please please please Update sooon
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy Shikamaru is going to help Naruto. He's really smart so that'll be good to have him help. I really liked it. Update again!
person GrowlingTurtlez
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story since you started posting it, but I've never reviewed! I think it's a wonderful story (I have a real soft spot for mpregs), and your writing style is very good. A lot better than some of the incoherent crap that gets posted so often. I hope you keep updating this great story.
person Briryan
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) I am sooo glad that Shikamaru is helping Naruto, any way he can. Still looking forward to read Sasuke response to the new that he is going to be a father. Looking forward to the next chapter.