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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Blue-eyed Fox
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi! I love your story! Interesting how you twist the plot! Love it! Hope you can update soon! ^_^
person Anya Moongem
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Update as much as you can, please?
person Anna
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that the story is great! But where's the rest of it?? write more please!!
person Phe
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Forgive me for not being signed in. Or for reviewing earlier for that matter. See, I've been following this fic since the beginning, but as I'm rarely signed in (I only sign in to update) I tend to delegate reviewing for later, and forget. But, I digress.

Anyhow, I love this fic of yours. Seeing two new chapters made me jump in glee. I think the closeness between Naruto and Gaara is sweet. The Kazekage's so protective, it's just adorable. And of course, Shikamaru would be around. And I know he'll be supportive in his own way, but I still beat my forehead against my palm when Naruto confirmed himself. He should have seen it coming. Shikamaru's sneaky, dammit!

Anyway, I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens.
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeee naruto with a kid! i wish this were finished cuz it soooooooo goood i luv it i luv it! and it all works out cux sasuke needs and heir and plus wouldnt naruto's kid be real stong? (sp?) yeah i'm convinceing myself XDXDXDXDXDXDXD wow gaara so nice (sigh)
person Neji
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeee naruto with a kid! i wish this were finished cuz it soooooooo goood i luv it i luv it! and it all works out cux sasuke needs and heir and plus wouldnt naruto's kid be real stong? (sp?) yeah i'm convinceing myself XDXDXDXDXDXDXD wow gaara so nice (sigh)
person mm
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz continue! its the best story ive read in ages and u got the characters perfect!
so sad and i hope naruto will be fine... do i sense a hint of gaara and naruto love?
person Cloudy
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person sisko66002 (not signed in)
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story and hope it is updated soon.
person anoymous
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi there! ur story is so cool! please update soon. this is so exciting!