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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Neko-Chan
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow....so many questions, all from one chapter ^_^
Great chapter btw! Cant wait for more!!!!
person losthimagain
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT! Way's Shika being so mean! That's not cool! Does he want to kill the baby?! Bad Shika!
person Briryan
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) I even like the cliffie at the end of it too! Have a question, are you going to have Naruto use his Sexy no Jutsu when it comes time to have the baby? Hope so. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person Keina
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!
Please update soon I love this story and you just let me wondering whats going to happen.... Naruto needs to learn hoe to think before he acts XD
person Tom
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey..you really should continue that story! it's really good i can't wait to read the rest of it! so continue the good work!

Sincerly,
Tom
person Jiro
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I love the story. Gaara's so cuuuuute!
person Teaspoon
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I enjoy reading every once in a while the plot line of naruto leaving home because of pregnancy. I usually don't finish a lot because by the 5th chapter or 6 I'm bored and dissapointed, but i've been enjoying myself here so far! Your plot line is developing nicely, and while I feel for naruto and for poor sasuke, I can't help but enjoy their current angsty situation. I know its bad, yet good.
person losthimagain
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ YAY! Naru-chan is going to be safe! YAY! ^^ Please update soon! This is the bestestest fic I've read in a long time!
person Shingo the Pest
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you brought up the black hair again. I had completely forgotten. How many months has it been so far? I'm anxious to see what Naruto acts like while pregnant. And how often will someone looking for him show up? Will there be any dangers?
person jess
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! gaara is so sweet! it's adorable to see him taking such good care of naruto. i also liked that you mention how much and how often people from konoha come looking for naruto. it makes the story more believable. as always, this story is fantastic and i will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! thank you much! *HUG* *kiss* love you!