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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...naruto have a baby...it is a boy or a girl? i holp is a girl with black hair blue eye. that will be so cute!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story!!! I agree with one of the reviewers that I wish we could get to the present time period, but I do love the entire backstory. It wasn't what I thought was going to happen and I truly have enjoyed it. I am not against details and find they are essential in any good story, but my interest lies in Sasuke's actions now that Naruto has left the village as well as how gaara will react to the entire telling of the situation. I look forward to the next chapter and hope it comes soon!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! this is one of the best stories i've read. i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!!^-^
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I sooo can't wait for the next chapter! So please update ASAP!! And I think your going at a good pace!! Keep up the great writting!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this fic! I absolutely adore mpregs, and this one's plot is so intriguing, has a good explanation on *how* Naruto could get pregnant, and it's well-written. I can't wait till the next chapter =D
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It would be nicer if you SPED UP THE STORY! Nobody wants to read a bloody story that takes five bloody years to get to the interesting stuff! Don't do bloody flashbacks that take over five fucking chapters to get through!
Otherwise, the plot is really interesting, despite it's dusgusting glaciar-slowness.
Otherwise, the plot is really interesting, despite it's dusgusting glaciar-slowness.
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the better written, well thought-out mpregs I've read. I really have a guilty pleasure in reading them but most of the time they aren't terribly good, or details are left out. This one is wonderful. I can't remember if I reviewed already but I've been following it and didn't check back for a bit. It's nice to see new chapters up.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that the plot line is great!!!
I only wish that you can type faster so that
we can find out whats happening next!!!
I am just wondering if there is going to be any Garaa/Naruto??
But I guess we'll just have to wait for that, now wont we??
Keep up the good work!!!!
I only wish that you can type faster so that
we can find out whats happening next!!!
I am just wondering if there is going to be any Garaa/Naruto??
But I guess we'll just have to wait for that, now wont we??
Keep up the good work!!!!
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i cant believe i am crying poor naruto T_T i really love this fan fic its pure awesomeness! please countinue and update a.s.a.p.!!!!!!!!
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, the first seven chapters have moved a bit slowly. But this chapter had a strong pace that was neither too slow nor too fast. Good job!