rate_review Reviews

Wah!!! that was one hell of a fanfic! one of the best!! really!! i really loved the fic! please, continue your fic! more power to you(",)

I really love this fic. It's really sad but it's really good! Thank you!

*takes out weedwhacker of doom and beats the crud out of the mean councilors* Go pick on someone else, ya creeps! Sorry, I just hate bullies and wanting to imprison Naruto just for having the Kyubbi is right along those lines. I hope ya have Gaara use his Sand Tomb technique on them if they try to come after Nartuo. Write more soon. Ja ne!

Wow, poor Naruto. His only love is being matched up with a wife, His village hates and fears him and now he has a baby to worry about. He just never gets a break. CAnt wait for more.

ahhh! so amazing! everything works and everything is good! you rock! taking your time is the way to go... that way we get all the story details and a feel for the characters and their feelings... i am so excited! this story is so addictive... I will be on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! i like kyuubi, he is evil... but not too evil. and sasuke and iruka's concern is so adorable! poor naruto is having such a bad month though! *grin* yay! thank you soooooooooooooooooo much! and please write fast... i need to know what happens next! (the marriage proposal thing is an excellent twist... as the the council wanting to lock naruto up. it is something that they would really do and it makes the perfect motivation for naruto to want to run to gaara. i am sad that gaaraxnaruto is onesided, though... those two are always so cute together. ahhh! but i also want sasuke to take care of naruto! like i said... i love you and please update soon! thanks!)

Sweet! *rates 5*

I don't think you need to speed up- but you should aim to finish Naruto's story telling to Gaara so the story can progess. Though I Understand that all these events are important and need to be told. Other than that I really enjoy the story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.

Great chapter!) Poor, poor Naruto. Just when he thinks things where going his way bam, things go so wrong. I like the way the story is moving. Can't wait to find out the reactions of Sasuke and Konoha when they find out that Naruto has left. Also looking foward to reading Gaara's reaction to Naruto's story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

those bastards! i hate em' i hate em' all! PLZ UPDATE I HATE THE VILLAGERS AND COUNCIL! FUCK EM' ALL TO HELL!

~notamawriter~

I don't think it's moving too fast or too slow. The pacing of the story feels very natural. I'm content to read this just as often as you continue to update. I think that the execution of the story is more important than anything else, what feels natural to you will likely feel natural to the other readers as well.