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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Neko-Chan
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was some chapter ^^ if it was moving slowly earlier, it sure as hell sped up in that last chapter ^_^
now i really cant wait for the next chapter!!
person themirror
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...this must be one of the best i ever read...^_^ keep going!
person nile_soul
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the story is interresting finish it for my sake pls oh and speed it up juuts slightly but all in all great
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Kyuubi told Naruto! And Kyuubi also said Sasuke has feelings for Naruto! Yes! Stupid council, and stupid villagers. Damn them. I really liked this chapter and can't wait for the next!
person ^_~
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was great, I'm glad your finally starting to update...i was starting to think that you wouldn't finish the story.

this was the VERY first naruto fic that i read and i was glad that it was, cause it IS very good.
person Briryan
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) I can't wait to read Naruto's reaction to his baby news. And to what everyone else will have to say about it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's starting to feel the symptoms! I wonder what Sasuke wanted to talk about? I really liked it! Please update again!
person Lanier
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was close. Naruto managed to squeak out of that one. Cant wait for more.
person blu sanada
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounded interesting so I thought that I would check it out. From what I've read so far I'll like to know what's going on. Thanks for the read.
person arryelle
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats so awsome please dpn't make the chappies shorter I love them just the way they are. Update soon

Loves Arry