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i like it. it has real potentional and cant wait to read more and what cause naruto to leave the village and sasuke. also i like the chapters the way they are so dont change them. :)

When the fuck did naruto get so fucking emo?

go on go on

(is it btw poseble I read either this story or a story alike to this??? I can'' remember really ^^')

No the chapters aren't too long. In fact, u could make them longer if u wanted to...i wouldn't mind! lol

oh i luv it. and the chapters are a great length enough to get you hooked and wanting the next chapter. i can already see the plot laying out i'm guessing naruto is pregnant and when he realises that he figures he has to leave, thats my guess anyways, can't wait to read more keep it up :P

Woot. Alright. So far it's going just the way I want it to ^_^. Hehehehe

Naruto's not being a BIG MOUTH and blurting out his undying love or letting on any more than he needs to. *Phew* I hate it when it gets all sappy like that. Gotta be a man about it, a real NINJA and keep up the facade. People tend to forget that they're still guys here and Naruto is pretty damned subborn one.

I may just be assuming things but if this is in fact the point where Naruto's pregnant I must say this:

It makes me happy to know that this isn't going to end up like all the other Naruto pregnancy fics where he breaks down and says all this girly stuff to Sasuke and they get together like it's nothing. Because I've read plenty of those and it always happens too fast.

I envision that Naruto would want to keep his dirty little secret to himself for as long as he could. Oooh and instead of going to Tsunade to find out that he's pregnant (who's going to want to weasel out of him who the baby's father and force him to tell Sasuke) he should go to Hinata (She could be a medic nin in training or something). She wont be nosey, she's keep his secret and most of all it would be different ^_^ instead of going to Tsunade all the time.

Well this is all senseless blabber. I'm sure you already know where you want your story to go ^__^. I LOVE your story so I cant help but think about all this random stuff. Forgive me if I seem like I'm preaching. PLEASE CONTINUE!

This was great! Update again!

omg! this is so HAWT! who cares about minor spelling or grammer mistakes!? GET ON WITH IT!...please?

Don't you dare shorten your chapters. I love long chapters and yours, to me, already seem to be short enough. Most stories i read have much longer chapters and i prefer it that way and i hope you do too. Anyway, i love your story and i can't wait to see why Naruto left...I hope Sasuke doesn't turn out to be a bastard. Much love, and can't wait!

Good fic ^_^ that was quite a beginning (im still trying to imagine Naruto with black hair...) im curious as to how he got to this point
hope you update soon!!