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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Briryan
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) I think that the chapters are a great lenght. You should keep them at this lenght. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person Lanier
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, poor Naruto. Does sasuke really not know what happened? Will he be able to hide it from Sakura and Kakashi? Cant wait for more.
person hypnotic
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad...does Sasuke really not remember what happen between them? Oh I wanna cry, poor Naruto. Well I'm going to hang in there, you said things would turn out ok in the end so...*sighs* I'm not going anywhere!
person sourita kinomoto
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter. can't wait to see what happens next. update soon please. ja ne ^_^
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is the holl story going to be naruto rembering gost to the point and say what hapens next.
person ...
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's pretty good!u should finish this story.
person ZeldaFitz
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. I wonder if Sasuke will remember? You've captured my interest and I especially appreciate the long chapters. Looking forward to the next update.
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Poor Naruto! I hope everything works out for him. I wonder if Sasuke will remember? Update again!
person Feion Phylar
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals* Yeeaaa! AN UPDATE~! I love this story! You took long but I can hold out as long as possible. Just promise you'll write more! *Sniffles* Poor Naruto....I was a little confused in the beginning but everything fell in place.

*Sighs* Take your time and dont rush things....I want to see a well written plotty story becase you've got something here. Work it out. ^__^ Can't wait for chapter 6!!!
person Pic's Pixie
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh great! please update soooon , i luv this fic please contiue it, poor naruto i hope the poison didn't effect sasuke till after they made love, but poor naruto would think that it happened when he was still delusional :(