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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Hypnotic
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Oh you have no idea how happy I am that your going to finish this story!
I'm a big fan, so I can't wait to see what happens next. I just feel so bad for Naruto right now...he's going though so much, and after what just happened between him and Sasuke, aww poor Naruto! I just hope Sasuke doesn't make him feel bad. I mean I think Sasuke wanted it just as much as Naruto...but still. I don't think Naruto can take any more! Oh please let everything turn out ok with Naruto-kun!
person Chaos_Mar
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I love this story. Excellent characterization & story line. You write angst beautifully.

Please update soon.
person Sarong Luv
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Author,

I really like the story so far (grin). I hope you make another chapter story soon.
person Stupidity Unleashed
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating!!! (praises you) But I hate cliffies ¬_¬ Oh well. I must say, I really like how this fic is turning out. Job well done! You've saved me from 30 min of utter boredom! Yes, I read slow, I kno >.< But hey -in the end I understand and remember better than my friends do. Damn those uber-fast readers!!
person Stupidity Unleashed
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating!!! (praises you) But I hate cliffies ¬_¬ Oh well. I must say, I'm very please with the way this fic is turning out. Job well done! You've saved me from 30 min of utter boredom! ...Yes, I do read slow so don't rub it in >.< But in the end, I understand and remember better so -HA! TAKE THAT YOU UBER-FAST READERS!
OH! I almost forgot: Update soon <3
person Linku
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read the whole story again cause I forgot where I left off. What happened?! What happened?! Was that dream not really a dream? Why did Naruto collapse? Don't leave me hanging! Continue please!
person nikki
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!WHAT'S NEXT!!!???...damnit you're making this fic iresistable and I can't wait to read more. nice touch and lengthy type chapters you just keep endearing yourself more and more to me!!!keep doing what you do.
person Evol
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOO! SEXY!
person hypnotic
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* no fair!! what happen? awww so mean to just leave me hanging like that...you'll update soon right? i wanna know what's going to happen. so hurry ok?

~ja.
person Fujinakaheero
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
noooo! You must update! You're not done the past part, I want to know what happens.. I want to know what certain event made Naruto leave, curse you! Please update soon!