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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Gwyllion
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* Such confusion and anxiety for naruto. *huggles* But I feel a little relieve on the scant bit of closure between Sasuke and Naruto. At least they're in speaking terms, which I'm really glad. I'm also touched by Gaara's words to protect Naruto and his baby. I really hope this won't cause anymore tension betweens the 2 countries and wage a war. Thank you so much for sharing this. I can't wait to read what happens next. Maybe a little smut between SasuNaru? At least a kiss or hug? Hahah....I'm asking too much. XD
person gaara89
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can't wait for the update.
person Nanaka
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay you're updating.... i can't help but wonder how i missed when you updated 14, hehe... i totally love this story and am so happy that you're updating again
person Gwyllion
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasps* A new chapter! You don't know how long I've been waiting for this. I'm so glad that Naruto and his baby are alive and well. Sasuke's being a bastard again as usual, which makes me even more protective of poor Naruto. I hope Sasuke will open his feelings more for Naruto. Can't wait to read your next one. Thanks so much for sharing! :D
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! You've updated. ^^

The wait was worth it. Man. Sasuke really is too stoic. No wonder Naruto wanted him to leave.

Looking forward to the next update. ^^

-Gwyn
person inumoon3
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I freaking love this story so please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
naruto sure is stubborn. i think they really need to speak of everything that happened and what they heard that would cause all this. I do hope they have a happy ending. Update again soon!!
person Trollmia
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must admit that when I found a notice that you've updated this story on FF.net I was quite delirious... :) I have been a lover of this story... And just the other day I was re-reading it and I thought to my self "I wonder if it's going to be updated again"... guess how happy I was to see it updated... *doing the baloon dance here*

You have me on edge but I like the fact that Naruto is keeping his edge against Sasuke and everyone else... it gives the story some spice, wanting you read more :) So yeah - I'm just waiting for the next chapter to "pop" up... you have all my ten thumbs up... (and yes - I'm a mutant with ten hands :) )
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG... what a great story! My heart was in my throat the whole time. I'm so glad the way that you had Sasuke react. Normally he'd do something stupid like fly off the handle, yelling whore and so forth. Having him calming and caringly accept the situation was beautiful. Now if only Naruto will get on board. And Gaara... don't get me wrong, love the guy, but back off Naruto... whether he wants it or not, he belongs to Sasuke. (blows raspberry... very mature, I know.)
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this Story. Thank you for continuing,I have been waiting awhile. I would love to read Sasuke's POV soon, but it's your story. I hope more is up soon. Thanks again