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You've got me hooked. I really want to know what happened to Naruto. Please update soon.

Quick you have so gotta put out the next installment of your story.
It so rocks!

O.O This sounds SO cool!!!!!!!!!!! an update really is nesasary and can there be Naruto X Gaara as well?!?! *loves that pairing as much as NaruSase*And and and and UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

-The Update Monster^^

Awsome! I really love your writing style and even though I just started to read Naruto stories...( could afford japanese dubs), it's still a different idea from a normal story! I really want to hear Naruto's story! Was it Sasuke-teme? Does Naruto dye his hair back, cause he's not Naruto without his hair! we'll please update soon because I'm really looking forward to it.

I like it so far. Hope you update soon!

This story is the bomb....
Please continue it...
PLEASE!!! ^-^
Ever loyal fan- Billy

No It's great so far please UPDATE A S P
THANKS!!!!!!

nice start, i like where your going with this, looking forward to the next part. n_n

Awww, why leave it there? I love this. So Naruto is pregnant with Sasuke's baby. But was he raped? Or he is afraid for Sasuke's reputation?

Good start, I like. Can't wait to hear what the story is that he's going to tell. But are you going to keep it in the first person point of view. I find that it's limiting. You can't talk about what other people are thinking and you can't switch points of view without having to announce it (meaning in first person points of view you can switch but you have to announce who's POV it is now). I think that 3rd person omniscient POV is best. Anyways you don't have to listen to me, your going to write in the POV that you feel most comfortable with. I hope that you update soon though, love Naruto mpregs. Though in this case I'm a bit sad that there's going to be a GaaNaru one-sided pairing. No offense but it's a bit old seeing a triangle with Gaara and Sasuke chasing after Naruto and Gaara always losing. I can't think of one story I've read with a triangle where Sasuke hasn't ended up with Naruto at the end. But again it's the choice of the author, I just think it would be better if either Gaara actual gets a chance for once or he's just a friend that cares a lot about Naruto. Anyways that's all, I'm kind of just using your story to complain about things that bug me, I'm sorry don't mind me. Just I like your story and I hope you update it soon with Naruto's story because that first chap has really left me curious.