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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Vague
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=34. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why havent you updated!!! i was loving this story!!1 *sniff*
person sethian
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where will Sasuke and Naruto have a conversation! I love your fic, I think it's the best Sasu/Naru I read! Are there other stories like that? if so can you tell me about them? I love this type of fic!
person Trollmia
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the former reviewer... I miss this story. It has depth and feelings. The chapters are long and very well written. You're a good writer and I do hope that you have a future for this "little" ficlet (which I can imagine take up bit of disc-space too). But I do hope that you can find it in your heart to continue this story. As I said - it's very well written and there is a lot work behind each chapter I imagine and thus - giving a reader goosebumps :)
person Trippin2Infinity
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHEN SHALL THOU ADD MORE?? Your driving me crazy here!!!
person Touya06
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please please update.

I really enjoy this story. It's so good. I hope Sasuke doesn't become an ass about Naruto and the baby.
Hopefully he'll show some love to Naruto. I'd hate to not see them get together.

I understand Sasuke's 'cold' attitude during the baby explanation, he's not really interested in people knowing anything about himself except for the one that he wants to be with, so I think you did a good job portraying his characters. Though once again assuming Sasuke really wants Naruto.

Well, keep up the great work.
Waiting impatiently for the next chapter. ;)

Ja!
person Teigra
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story (did a search on MPreg and this was the first hit) and I LOVE IT. These two are my favorite couple... even if they do fight like cats and dogs sometimes. I'm not great at reviewing, other than stating how much I've enjoyed reading this. I hope to read more when the next chapter is released.
person redtatsu
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where did you go? Did you move to another site? You left me (and others) hanging. I hope you update soon or maybe let me know where I can continue to read your story. I pray to the fanfiction goddess that you haven't given up on this. Thanks!!!!
person alaynea
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!! it's killing me o wait this long
person Dardlea
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is seriouly one of the best I've ever read. So... Update please ?