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chap 4 missing.rws hot too'

Very nice story, though i get confused sometimes as to who is talking. If you could make that clearer. Also you tend to jump around in time between present and flashbacks. If you could denote these more, the story'd be much less confusing. Good job otherwise!

MOOREEe GOSHDARNISH!!!! wow, so, the plot thickens. And this is probably the most captivating storyline I have read yet, yeah? (couldn't resist, *snickers* XD) But, its unique and out of the ordinary, which is holding your readers at attention, do continue, the meeting between the two uchihas should be most.....FUN, *mind too muddled to think of anything rational* your story is amazing, so please, write away. *flutters off*

Wahahahha...i STILL love this ...but...i'm confused...all that sex was a dream, right? and ok right i get it now lol...niiiiice new chapter! MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!

OOOOH !THIS IS REALLY GOOD>I LOVE THIS.i'm creaming.Your Sasuke is to *cough *die for.When he hit the stage,what he said.Brilliant oh goddess brilliant.I am trying not to come on with the puns like"you rock""Viva la Uchiha"Oro eh.Arghhh,turns inside out with GLEE baby huge mounds of GLEE!It is so of the zieghiest.To be more circumspeck....no !I can't !Squeals like a pig.Give it to me Baby!!!!Oh ordering the cops out of his hospital room was slick for a kid.Not bad.,I was trying to guess where this was going(couldn't do it)Once I stop smoking this crack,in about ,ohhh say 6 hours ,I'm hoping another chapter will be up and I'll give better reveiw.I read the first couple chaps of your other fic before my computer collapsed,you are definitly talented,thats for sure.Part of a new wave I see coming in fic wise,talent wise.Keep it up and f'g thanks ,I needed that!

This is awesome! Sasuke is soo kewl especially in the end when he's like 'i'm better than all of you' And it's a damn interesting plot you thought of! I'm so in love with this fic ^^ Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

This is a good chapter just enough hint of more to come and excellent way to bring kabuto and Orachi in to the ,mix. but were is Naruto , and what will Itachi think of his younger brother now.

OMFG, just WOW. This story is insane. Perfectly laid out, sasuke a sparkling goth *drool* and itachi still yet to come. Goodness, updation must occur rapidly, every 10 mins, or things will get ugly *sigh* that was evil inner person talking, MUST update ASAPPPPPP. please. *hands fruit cake* (ew) but will make things nuttier!!!! hahahaaaaa, couldn't resist T.T

OMG that was...awesome! my favourite paragraph: “…You’re all so pathetic.” It was just a breath, laced with the summation of his anger and solitude. All of them responded to his venom and repulsion with adoration and cheers.
that's SO Sasuke! I must say...i am dying to see what happens next! ^^