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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've already reviewed this fic, but it's so good, and you deserve more feedback than you're getting. I thought I'd suggest posting on one of the LJ Uchihacest communities. I would suggest either http://www.livejournal.com/community/churchofuchiha or http://www.livejournal.com/community/uchiha_crack .
You won't get LOADS of feedback there, as it's hard to get attention for any Uchihacest fic, because there are far less fans for the pairing than there are for, say, SasuNaru, but it might get you a few more critiques. Just a suggestion, though, and good luck with the next chapter!
You won't get LOADS of feedback there, as it's hard to get attention for any Uchihacest fic, because there are far less fans for the pairing than there are for, say, SasuNaru, but it might get you a few more critiques. Just a suggestion, though, and good luck with the next chapter!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... wow. I honestly don't know what to say. This really deserves a better review than I can give at this time of night. You had Itachi down perfectly. And I loved the way that Sasuke's so innocent before Itachi does what he does, while still retaining the personality that he has in the series. Of course, he WOULD have been more innocent before his parents were killed, no matter what age he was. Really, great job. You kept him in character while still changing him to suit your AU.
I also love that Itachi positioned their parents so that they could hear everything. That's so very... ITACHI. I'm assuming that he did rape Sasuke, and Sasuke just blocked it out. Dissociative disorder? Makes sense.
I hope to see another chapter very soon, I'll have to remember to check the AU section. I'll add this to my recommended reading, just in case. Once again, GREAT job, and good luck with the rest of the fic!
I also love that Itachi positioned their parents so that they could hear everything. That's so very... ITACHI. I'm assuming that he did rape Sasuke, and Sasuke just blocked it out. Dissociative disorder? Makes sense.
I hope to see another chapter very soon, I'll have to remember to check the AU section. I'll add this to my recommended reading, just in case. Once again, GREAT job, and good luck with the rest of the fic!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fucking awesome...
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was way cool, I hope to see more soon, way awsome
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was...more then amazing! Beautifully written work and I do hope that you update soon so that I can read more! Good luck with writing the next chapter and I hope to see it soon. ^_^
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ow. This hurt in ways that felt indescribably good. Your Itachi was wonderful and creepy and so intense I'm surprised he didn't smolder. As for Sasuke, I loved this innocent side of him. I cannot wait for more!