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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee! Get to a place with wireless in the near future with more chapters, okay aneki?
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I’ve only read the first chapter which is well done. However, most people would have bit of respect for Naruto after the Chuunin exam and if he was promoted to ANBU I’m sure the respect would build.
Anyway, a few massive paragraphs are not always the best idea. Try one large paragraph, followed by two small, three medium sized and one more large. From what I’ve seen and heard over the years too many large paragraphs turn off readers, smaller ones also give them a bit of push to read. Just so you know each line of dialogue is its own paragraph.
Anyway, a few massive paragraphs are not always the best idea. Try one large paragraph, followed by two small, three medium sized and one more large. From what I’ve seen and heard over the years too many large paragraphs turn off readers, smaller ones also give them a bit of push to read. Just so you know each line of dialogue is its own paragraph.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, you mentioned me!**grins Naruto style**
Don't think I didn't catch the reference to "ninja tech" either.
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You're gonna have to tell me about the hamsters and elderberries here in a sec.
lurv much!
hana-chan
Don't think I didn't catch the reference to "ninja tech" either.
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You're gonna have to tell me about the hamsters and elderberries here in a sec.
lurv much!
hana-chan
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting! lol I can't wait for the next update!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just found out this story and I think this one's unique. It's rare to find a naruuga story. I like it! But anyway, you wouldn't mind if I ask you to make your chapters a little bit longer? It's makes me kind of frustrated in a good way you know...'I want more!' I'd scream to myself! hehe...Good job! Hope you'd update soon!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Hinata ne-san! The story's great! I won't be on much, but it was good to get a chance to read this!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so sweet!
but please dn't let it end here!
but please dn't let it end here!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I hope Neji takes the news well. Great chapter. I love this story.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic. Good job, keep on going. Oh, and by the way, you were a perv before the comment at the end. Later ^_^
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was another amazing chapter it was soooo hot!
And I'm so glad to hear you're continuing this story! ^^
And I'm so glad to hear you're continuing this story! ^^