rate_review Reviews

Brilliant. Wow, that was really good. And so incredibly hot. Damn, nice job!

“Let’s try Chidori again.” *lol* Back to work like nothing happend.
I love this one! It's really great. Kakashi teaching masturbation. *rofl*
(Normally I don't like KakashixSasuke pairing, but you can not call this 'pairing')

Mali

that was kind of weird.

Thank you for your constructive critism. Do me a favor, read my other fics and see if Kakashi does that in all of them. Because if so, then I need to fix that. ;)

LoL Loved the story! How they just continued training right after. Very nice and short Keep it up :P

._. I'm almost depressed. Turned-on, but depressed. Now if people go and read my fic, they'll think I copied you! *Fist!* I won't have it! This is officially a smut rivalry! YES! I must make MY month alone in the middle of dusty nowhere something that leaves yours lacking and unfulfilling! I must ruin your brilliance and filthy, brilliant idea with my own!

And ah... thanks for the inspiration. *Shuffles off with tissues in his nose*

The story itself was very good, and very well-written. You had me enjoying a pairing that really isn't my favorite. My only complaint is that your reasoning for what Kakashi did is a tad flimsy. I mean... it makes sense in a roundabout way, but not enough sense for Kakashi to, in a sense, molest his student. XD Not that I didn't ENJOY that, but considering both their personalities, I think they'd have both needed more incentive to do what they did.

Other than that, great work, and keep writing! I'll look forward to more from you.