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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uwaaa, nice job! most of the time original characters are really stupid psonality-wise, but youve gotten quite a few very well included in yours! email me when yu update it please? my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Call me stupid if you wish but I was confused about gaara, his hair is red not black does he like dye it, if so y?
(Feel free to ignore these question if you want, I just had to ask them.)
(Feel free to ignore these question if you want, I just had to ask them.)
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story, but wonder where ur going w/ it. please update soon, and please add me to ur mailing list. Good luck w/ the rest of the story ^_^
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mind that i havn't read all the chapters yet... yours are very short while somew start ot get into the longer category i think u should keep them around the size of chapter 2 from my point of view but thats just me i like the plot they all seem like average highschoolers.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my god ... love it. can't wait for next ch.
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June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hurry and update soon
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heyoh
I like this story thought I cant tell what kidna of coupling is goign on ehre really...
That girl Riley Im guessing someone who resembles you kinda reminds me of well me...
funny thing to my nick is Rei ^-^
I like this story thought I cant tell what kidna of coupling is goign on ehre really...
That girl Riley Im guessing someone who resembles you kinda reminds me of well me...
funny thing to my nick is Rei ^-^
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice stuff al together ^_^
and well writen too.
only comment i have is about the last chapter, and i quote
"As the game proceeded Shikamaru seemed to be losing, which worried his mother dearly. “What’s on your mind honey?” she asked moving(!) another piece."
In the beautifull game of Go you don't move pieces, you only place them ^^
and well writen too.
only comment i have is about the last chapter, and i quote
"As the game proceeded Shikamaru seemed to be losing, which worried his mother dearly. “What’s on your mind honey?” she asked moving(!) another piece."
In the beautifull game of Go you don't move pieces, you only place them ^^
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey are you writting this with someone else? if so your partner has already posted the story.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im agreeing with the last reviewer..This is so confusing and weird.. Are you two the same person?? Why does this story belong to two different authors...@_@...Shock~