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for This is the Present

by Bloodyfire

person Cibiboy
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story i cant wait to see some action between naruto and sasuke cant wait till your next Chapter.
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fire in eyes* you have GOT to update this!
person kyoko
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an intersting story...are any of the other characters ever going to stop being so mean to Naruto? :-( and is kyuubi going to make another appereance during this?

i cant wait to read the rest of the story...good beginning
person losthimagain
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's cool............I like YAOI.....and I can't wait for an update ^^

-The Update Monster
person Mija
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok I like this, its interesting, its not so much AU as it is in the future you say?? so these are like reincarnations or decendants and all right??? very interesting, I like how different Sasuke is without the whole brother killled his clan business, and poor Naru, even in this life he suffer..poor baby..not fair that Kyuubi had to be passed down, and how does EVERYONE know after all this time?? you think it would be ancient freakin history by now darn it...*ok takes deep breath to calm down* sorry, is soo angry on Naru baby's behalf...sigh..anyhow would like to see where you go with this, hope you update again real soon, ty for the great read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Kenz
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update asap.
person losthimagain
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update and throw Gaara in to the mix PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (you see.......she *hearts* Gaara and would like him to play a big part vary much so) What was Naruto drawing?!?!?!?!?!?! (.....She hopes it was Gaara.....) I hope it was something awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (......like Gaara.....) Please update I really want to know what's going on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (.......No she just wants Gaara........She needs to get a life and stop bothering inoccent fan fiction writers with her stupidity....*sigh*....) UPADTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries real hard* why stop now?! i loved this!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there's more to come right. you czn't end it like this...you can't