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for Falling is Like This

by WolfPilot06

schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good, a plot and a sub-plot...I can get into this.
person oberlisk
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How sad. The only people who bothered to show were his friends.
Konoha is probaly laughing and celevrating at the 'Demons' death. It is like the very heavens are crying out to Naruto. UPDATE soon.
person Chiisako
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love it!! I can't wait to read more. It's really interesting.
Please update soon. I'm really looking forward to it. ^o^
person dragondame57
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgsh.. this is so sad.. the fact that there is no naruto.. in a naruto fanfic no less... no chance of his revival? TT.TT

well.. that place where they get to see the dead ones rise again.. should be interesting.

update soon!
person padoopadoop
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I wasn't sure if I wanted to read this when I first saw it listed, but have read all three chapters so far. I am now very intrigued with your story. I've only noticed one typo (yay!) and no atrocious grammar, which are big downers when I read them. I hope you keep this going - I'm really starting to get into it!
person Mija
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh please dont stop writing this fic, its sooooo good, sad but good, I am not sure If I have reviewed before this, if not then I am truelly sorry, I get limited time on the net lately and I read all I can but fail to review, *slaps my hand in punishment* but I do try, anyhow it made me cry, my poor Naru is dead, and now theres zombies walking around the Mist??? *wonders if Naru baby will show up*..ooh that would be wayyy to creepy and it would totally screw with Sasukes mind hehe thats why it should happen, but then I will cry again, cause it is truelly sad that my Naruto is dead, *still in shock over that part* really am I can not imagine a fic without Naruto in it...but since I lost my dad and grandmother both 9 months ago, my uncle 7 months ago and my cousin 6 months ago, all very close to me except the cousin, although his passsing did leave a hole in me, I understand the way they all feel, you feel like the world should stop and grieve with you, that it shouldnt just keep going when your whole world has just been put upside down and spinning out of control...you want to stop people on the street and tell them to stop smiling to stop laughing...to tell the sun and the birds to go away that it should be dark and gloomy, to rain so that the sky can cry with you...yes cheesy but soo true..and you feel like your walking in a dream, wishing and praying that you will wake up to find it all back the way it was, and untill then, nothing is the same, nothing is normal....sigh...sorry bout that, I vented, sorry...but I do love this fic, hope you continue to write it and hope to read more soon, thank you for the great read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:)
person powder07blossom
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok...At first, I was a little apprehensive since you killed the main character of the anime...On this current chapter, I liked the fact that you mentioned resurrection...Maybe Naruto would show up after all...But I like the story so far...Kepp it up... :D
person evol
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is cool
person wouldn't-u-like-2-no
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*crying*
person URBitch
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
right, naruto would want a party not a funeral. i cried. cant wait to see were this goes.