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I really like your style - it's very concentrated; not just in quantity, but for your every one sentence, there is a bounty of imagery and information that perhaps another author would take three paragraphs to communicate. This is not a twenty-page chapter fic containing unnecessary bulk, like "Ino said 'Hi Shika' and he said 'Hi Ino, how troublesome' and they saw Kiba and Akamaru went 'arf'" etc. LoL.. I think you know what I mean. (Nothing really wrong with those fics, seriously, but it can get old and sometimes, well, boring?)
Very daring too - you've gone somewhere *I* don't know I have the guts to go, what with actually killing the poor baby.
Sasuke is and will be *very* fascinating to watch go through this. I actually love deeply psychological expose-kinda stories concerning my favorite characters. (Though this is hard on me, Naruto being my favorite character, to me a fic centered around his death is a serious buttload of Naruto love.)
This is one that will stick with me for a long time, and I hope you do complete it.
I wish I had some concrit to give, but really, I'm still so deeply moved by what you just shared with me that I can't think a thing but "I wonder what happens next!"
Besides, you're really good at this. ( :

-DeeDubya

I loved it! ;o; BUT DEAD NARUTO = SAD ME!! SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!! But, if you continue to write as well as you have been, I can forgive.....Maybe. =D <3 Update soon! XD

sssSSSSWWWWWEEEEEEETTTtttttttt ^_^.... unique..i haven't yet seen a naruto fic like this one truely original...i'm insteaded in the yaoi part .. and what role thats plays...almost all the fics i have read so far are action based so like i said it would be nice to take a break from the every day basic that everyone knows in naruto and live the real life..no..true life-IF-...looking forward for the next chappie..ja-ne

I'm kinda curious how you're gonna continue this since Naruto is dead. Is his spirit gonna haunt Sasuke or something?
well, like I said, I'm curious so
UPDATE.
=D

omg you made me CRY...*wails-sniffles-sobs* No no no Naru baby cant be dead...and omg the heart felt pain of Sasuke and Sakura, and omg Iruka??? you had me really balling there..sniffles, both chapters were beautifully done, sad, but well written and full of detail, sooo cant wait for more, even if my heart is breaking...*yes I do know its only a story of an Anime charactor-but it still hurts darn it* ok I am calmer, sorry bout that, excellent read, thinking I really needed those tears, sniffles, ty again, hope to read another update soon, much huggles and smiles Mija...btw what the heck are they going to do with out Naru now??? the village will be soo lifeless, do dull...*sniffles*

.........*cries* So good...update soon....*heartbroken*

WAAAAA!!!!

*sobs*

NARU_CHAN!


ok hurry up and update

Continue... u_u it's sad, and I luv it ToT; though u could make bigger chaps >.>

Wow...I can't see my keyboard right now, says something about the characters, no? I'm impressed so far, and I hope you keep going! This is a great story, your style is--hope you don't take this wrong--very appropriate to the subject. It r0xx0r5.