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by mischiefmaker

person DevilLived
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love this story. I hope you continue it.

The comment about Sasuke's mother was going a bit far, I think. Even if it was very smooth.

These two have to learn when to fight and when to screw. Yep yep :D.

Update soon, alright?
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
completely unrealistic, but for PWP not bad~

go go gadget egotwists!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmao! that was hilarious. i can't wait to read the next chapter. great job!
person sapphirexkat2
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequel please!!! Great job. Loved this so much.
person temptingping
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent so far, yes, please do some more. Pay backs are a bitch and this is shaping up to be a good one.
person Hime-sama (out)
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...naughty Naruto...want more!!! ^___^
person Greenie
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I like it!
Very to the point, they were kept it character and it was
a good read all around! Hope you add another chapter! ^^
NaruSasu is the best! ^^ Ta ta!
~Greenie, The NinjaKnight