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for Only Me Now

by Jinhito

person Ayako
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your Sakura. <3
person sansty
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wahoo! VERY NICE!! sakura's POV isn't usually this big in other stories but I kinda like how u made it span over a whole (long) chappie. pretty good. so...when do we get to see sasuke? O.O i just wanna hug both sakura and naruto! mew. having to put up with those two, even though many ppl like sai. STILL!!! naruxsasu will always be the number one pairing! *throws chopstick at sai* GRRR. can't wait till your next update! probably takes HEAPS long to write such a long chappie like that with practically no grammer or spelling mistakes. loved it!
person jazzy
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a really intensely fascinating story here, I really hope that chapter 291 or whatever will get released soon so that we can see what you have
planned.

Hey do you have more plans for Sai trying to get at Naruto? And what the hell is Sai doing why the hell does he want Naruto is it really just some kind of sick game to him?

Any way this is an awsome story.
person ladygizarme
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! you wrote more! will there be more after this?? i hope so!
person Yaoi Fan
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Give me more!!! This is the greatest Sai/ Naruto ever!!!
person Kiff
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot, I love the comical edge to the narration. Naruto is so IC I could cry. Was this the end? -feet shuffel-
person phoenixdown7
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enthralled by your writing style...not to mention the original premise. Using Sai as a catalyst for Naruto's memories of Sasuke is a really interesting read. Thank you for writing this. ^_^

Also, I read on your profile that you do betaing services. I was wondering if you could beta the last chapter of my fic, ThreeAlls. If you can, just e-mail me. Thanks.

Good luck on the updates! I'm enjoying this immensely.
person Ghonchi (2 lazy 2 sign in)
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! some Sai action! there isn't enough Sai out there.
If you ask me, I think Sai is a pretty nice guy, but just a bit too emotional detached. knowing the famous Naruto powers, it'll be solwed soon snough...!
anygate, I love your story, it's nicely written and original ^^b go you!
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
slept with his eyes open? is that even possible? *kitty eyeds*
person Just_me
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is great. How did I miss the first chapter when it was posted...?! Nah, anyways, you did a good job. Your the first to write a Sai/Naruto/Sai story. Heck, your the first who wrote about Sai in general. I could glomp you. Sai is a gorgeous beauty with a bad mouth. And evil as hell for changing into Sasuke. *perverted giggle*
You should've warned people when you started a flashback in chapter 2. For me it was a bit of confusing to read. *shrugs* Maybe I was the only one.
But you definatly have to write more. It's to funny to see Naruto twitch everytime Sai gets close or makes a comment. *grins*
till next update (if you continue this story) ja ne ^^V