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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm... things are getting more interesting ne? XD keep up the good work!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is wonderfully delicious! you had me going back and forth being confused about the real identity of 'Sasuke' too! your writting is very thought out and plotted; it hints at many things while bring an onslaught of emotions for both the story and the reader. this is very well done. it would be a shame if you did not continue, but it would be a waste if you continued on without a plot in mind. it is up to you if you want to leave this as a one-shot, but i think making this a multi-chaptered story would bring much appreciation of the growing sai/naru and sasu/naru fans. thank you for your awesome story and good luck with everything else you have in mind!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh oh...how interesting! i wonder what would happen if the real Sasuke come back? update soon!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROAR. BRILLIANT. I looove it. Angsssssst, I feed on it. xD PLEASE KEEP GOING! I have a feeling that this is gonna be added to my favorites list. <33
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are an evil, evil woman. *so impressed*
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! as soon as sai showed up i immediately thought of this kind of scenario!! yes, please write more!
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....Wonderful.
Your writing strongly suggests intelligence and innovative thinking, as well for an appreciation of tactfully executing psychological factors. You've delved so appropriately, and the character interaction, the mental assault, the phrasery, everything combined created something very realistic, made me curl in my seat, mentally stimulating, and.... arousing. *blush*
I haven't read anything so well of this manner for a long, LONG time.
AND YES I WOULD ADORE READING MORE HOT DAMN.
Your writing strongly suggests intelligence and innovative thinking, as well for an appreciation of tactfully executing psychological factors. You've delved so appropriately, and the character interaction, the mental assault, the phrasery, everything combined created something very realistic, made me curl in my seat, mentally stimulating, and.... arousing. *blush*
I haven't read anything so well of this manner for a long, LONG time.
AND YES I WOULD ADORE READING MORE HOT DAMN.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The "I'm goona leave you.." hit like WHAM, poor Naruto
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man at the end when he said "i'll leave you" naruto must have hurt so much, imagining being left again. Its cruel, i hope naruto gets payback, but then again he seem to yearn for sasuke in this story. I'd love to read more thankyou
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Naruto?" it came again, a little closer now. "Why won't you look at me... dobe."
He gave in.
^fav. line. T.T I feel so bad for Naruto! Your writing is wonderfully on par and I really do hope to see more to either this story line or your authoring abilities later on. Happy Christmas!
He gave in.
^fav. line. T.T I feel so bad for Naruto! Your writing is wonderfully on par and I really do hope to see more to either this story line or your authoring abilities later on. Happy Christmas!