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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should continue to write more. I find it to be good for the first chapter. I also like the idea.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good use of history but i was just wondering is this going to stay a Fr Relation ship between N+S or is it going to turn into love?
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very difficult angle you've taken here, but a very worthwhile one. I like the concept, and you'll done a decent job hilighting the parallels between the world you're creating and the one you are trying to reflect.
If I had to give one piece of advice, it's this: Don't rush it. Many authors here on aff who try to write something so difficult tend to push things too fast, and it falls apart. Take your time and let things happen. If it takes a couple weeks to write a chapter, fine. If a chapter goes on for over 20 pages, fine. It's worth it.
Hmm....I've been around here (Naruto section of aff) for a while now....haven't left many reviews. I really hope you continue this project. It's always nice to see really innovative ideas around here. (And new blood too. But that sounds so....)
(There. Does that go beyond the usual OMFG! Update! *Spazz*? Good. ^_^)
Stay Frosty,
~CC
If I had to give one piece of advice, it's this: Don't rush it. Many authors here on aff who try to write something so difficult tend to push things too fast, and it falls apart. Take your time and let things happen. If it takes a couple weeks to write a chapter, fine. If a chapter goes on for over 20 pages, fine. It's worth it.
Hmm....I've been around here (Naruto section of aff) for a while now....haven't left many reviews. I really hope you continue this project. It's always nice to see really innovative ideas around here. (And new blood too. But that sounds so....)
(There. Does that go beyond the usual OMFG! Update! *Spazz*? Good. ^_^)
Stay Frosty,
~CC
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... you're definitely no clueless idiot, if i may say! interesting start. you should keep it up!
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love the story line. How ironic, Hilter wanted to create a community that was blue-eyed, blonde hair which is whta Naruto has. Also if you make the 4th Naruto's father they both fit the 'guidelines' other than the fact that they were jewish. Also, what a coincidence, my class is learning about the concentration camps and I have to do a paper on the final solution. Anyways, love the story and very original idea. Can`t wait to find out what happens next.
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