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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I normally dont even bother reviewing stories because everyone else already said what I wish to say, but this poem has to be my favorite out of anything I have ever read and I would like to tell you to keep up your great work.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i didn't know about naruto's life being shortened because of kyuubi healing him! damn... good poem though. it was really sad, but i loved it just the same.
-inc
-inc
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no its not when hes healing its only in 4th tail form where da chakura shield is so hot his blood escapes from every pore from his body while da inner chakra heals him constinly. so when dat happens, da after effect is like tsunades jutsu
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an very good poem, the best i've ever read, time to read another of yours
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this was a really interesting poem. I really liked it. Especially the line about Sakura chopping off her hair.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was awsome! ^_^ I just love your work, especially Ink Me... Anywho, loved it!
Neko
Neko
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was beautiful. Loved the rhymes and the structure of it. You write poetry very well. Keep it up.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful poem, I absolutely loved it!
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations you had me near tears by the end. I am totally in love with the tone and especially the final stanza. You have definately captured the essence of Naruto's realtionships with his two precious people. Beautiful, truthful and sad.