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for Just Too Sexy For His Own Good

by Ruri

person Trollmia
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just too hilarious... and wonderful...
Put a bright smile on my face all day!!!
person Mija
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg...*drools* I have spent last night and just now reading the entire 12 chapters and I sooooooooooo want MOREEEEEEEEEE......aaacccckkkk...dont tell me Gaara is gonna want Naru too??? and poor Naru baby...seeing his beloved Sensei riding his other perverted sensei??? omg they did break him, hes scarred for life...lol..but I sooooo do love Kaka/Iru pairings as much as Sasu/Naru ones...so can I bet as well???? I place a million on Sasuke...ok so its monopoly money but hey it still counts right??? right????...anyhow you have sooooooo gotta update, please??? this is soo good I have to read more, its funny and sexy and just too good to stop there, needs me another chapter soon..hehe, anyhow great work and thank you for that wonderful read, till next chapter huggles and smiles Mija...btw does Hinata still love Naru?????
person liankitty
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah! So cute! I like when Naruto cries after Tsunade mentions Iruka; I'd cry too if I weren't busy drooling, but seeing as Iruka is like Naruto's father, crying is definately appropriate. Now, of course, Gaara has shown up which (most likely) means there is a third contender and if he plays his cards right, he'll be far, far ahead of Sasuke or Neji who, like idiots, have become overly competitive. The Naru/Sasu and Neji/Naru scenes were just HOT and I'm glad it didn't jump right into full-on sex right away.
Thankso for writing, this story is so cool!
person claire
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Add in GaaraNaru since he is there XDDDDD
person 0ne-Winged-Angel
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this chapter. i hope you update again soon. And oh my gosh Gaara is going to be in the story plot *squeal* is there going to be some Gaara/Naruto action? here's some ramen for updating. Ja Ne
person shinara
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahahah entertaining ^_^
person Tamara
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa this is a very crazy story it would be kool if Naruto ended up with Gaara....yea that would be REAL NICE
*hint, hint*
update when you can!
person Hyped on Chocolate
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. My. Hero.

I love your story! Its hilarious. Poor Naru-chan. Sasuke & Neji are after his ass (literally. *snickers)
Personally, I like NejiNaru (or a threesom)


One of my favorite parts ever (besides the part where Sasuke and Neji get tricked by Naru-chan)

"Why dont you stay with Iruka-sensei?"
Naruto began to cry.

Hell yeah! KakaIru all the way!!!!!!
person MedicNinM
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Friggen' Awesome! Your story is so well written! I just read ALL 11 chapters that are posted! I can't wait to see who Naruto ends up with... *coughSASUNARUcough* ^_^ Is this purely a fight between Neji and Sasuke?? or will Gaara show up?! *grins evily* That could be fun! Heh... either way... I can't wait for the update!!
person annabellemanix
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wai!!!!! im LOVING this story!! (-_^)..v i especially liked when naruto asked sasuke what he was doing at his place and sasuke replied "im gonna catch me a fox" hahaha...and then when he tells the kids hes 'hunting' and they say he reminds them of kakashi...lol...and the girls' betting pools are GREAT!!!! please update this soon!! and is there any way you could email me when you do?