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for Just Too Sexy For His Own Good

by Ruri

person Crimson_Revenge
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww. The swimming chapter was really cute!!!!! But, I was kind of hoping Ino's team would win........ I was looking forward to Naruto being Sasuke's slave for a week...... *evil smile* Ah, well...... Sasuke will get Naruto back for whatever Naruto makes him do..... ^_^ Hee hee. Makes me happy just thinking about it....... I love this fic. The hide and seek was cute as well. I like Sauke being 'it', and going after Naruto.... *another evil smile* Well...... I hope you update soon!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Courtney
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved the new chapters! awsome job with this! I want to read more. You write some really awosme humor! I don't want the SasuNarut one to end, But I want to read to others too @_@ ACK Well I survive.... if you update more!!!! <3

<3-Courtney
person claire
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke!!!!!! Not suprise if Gaara can't swim XD
person lock
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY i like your story! nevermind people who flames on your story! maybe they're just jelous that your are a great writer and its your story so your the boss! i'll wait for your next update! til next time!
person Elric Maxwell
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee! When I saw all the major updates, I was jumping for joy! I can't help but wonder that since you had Naruto choose Sasuke, will you have something start between Neji and Gaara? But I like how you had the sand nin show a more relaxed side of himself. It makes him even cuter in my eyes! ^_^ I can't wait for more! EM
person cibiboy
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so funny lol lol plez update soon
person Anne
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! So fast updating! Anyway, the story is as good as always. And it also has so funny situations. Oh, and it's a good idea what you've said about writing three endings (though I prefer SasuNaru ending, I'm sure I'll also enjoy the other two endings). Anyway, I like it so much, really. So update soon and go on! See you soon! ;)
person Anne
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it's me again. It's just to ask you for more yaoi content (yes, I'm a mad yaoi fan girl! I love it! XD). Anyway, sorry for bother you about it, I'll stop being such a pain, or at least, I'll try it! XD. Good work and update soon! See you soon! ;)
person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi, so funny, I laughed a lot! I mostly liked the scenes with Come Come Paradise. This book really looks cool! Anyway, I'm loving so much your story so keep updating again. Ja!
person tsusami
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that IS genius! I look forward to the Naru/Gaara lovin *_____*