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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Idea! Sounds like a lot of worlk tho -.- I'm impressed that you'd be up for it!
Awesome story though! I was laughing so hard during the entire fic I nearly peed myself! o.O
The lemon was AWESUM!!! As was the potion idea near the first!
Oh, and I like the relationship between Sakura and Rock Lee... kinda cute!
Well, I had better stop praising you before you get to full of yourself to write more! *sticks out tongue* Just Kidding!
~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
Awesome story though! I was laughing so hard during the entire fic I nearly peed myself! o.O
The lemon was AWESUM!!! As was the potion idea near the first!
Oh, and I like the relationship between Sakura and Rock Lee... kinda cute!
Well, I had better stop praising you before you get to full of yourself to write more! *sticks out tongue* Just Kidding!
~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't contain my laughter in the 20th chapter the kids were so funny XDDDDD omg you did a great job writing this keep up the good work!!!!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it when the kids were trying to figure out why Naruto was walking funny. I LOVED IT!!!! Reminds me of my cousins....(shivers involuntarily)
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just wanna say how much i love your fic
it is really entertaining and i eagerly await every installment
one point though you spelled Akatsuki Atasuki in some of the previous chapters
it is really entertaining and i eagerly await every installment
one point though you spelled Akatsuki Atasuki in some of the previous chapters
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're still going to continue on with the original plot though, yes? After that previous chapter I couldn't stop giggling, but it still has a sense of seriousness still occuring. Wouldn't it be hard to continue on when there are three different possible 'endings'. If Sasuke/Naruto is what was intended, you should keep it that way. I'm sure the readers don't care either way since they should be more happy with your writing skillz. The whole thought of what you're brewing up is sort of confusing to say the least...It's a thoughtful idea, don't get me wrong, but it's still, nevertheless, confusing. Heh, gomen, I love the story and you're the author so I'm not trying to say "Do this!", but I'm just...wondering :3
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats a good idea!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!! It was really funny with the genins guessing what happened to Naruto's ass.... That's awesome!!! I love the chapter. And I think the three different endings is a good idea. Now I don't have to worry about the problems that I had with choosing the one I want to be with Naruto. Now I can see each one with him. That makes me happy. It was a great chapter. Hope you update the next one soon!! I <3 you!!!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad your doing it like that (each of them getting Naruto)
but you did started out making it Sasu/Naru which disappointed me so :'(
it put tears to my eyes lol...tears of saddness of course.
i was just wondering why you put Sasu/Naru first anyways...thinking in the circumstances that stories like your always end up like that (Naruto always choosing Sasuke)
I didn't want to say anything yesterday about Naruto's first and oringal choice b/c you were having problems with that...ahem....."out of line reviewer"
So if you don't mind i'll say what i really wanted to say yesterday....Yesterday i notice alot of chapters and i was thinking "damn where the hell was i when she updated all these chapters" when i last read this story Sasuke's genin was missing when i came back to the story she was found, Naruto made his choice, you had an authors note and a message for that "pissed off reviewer" Me being the Nosey person that i am read the message anyways even though it wasn't for me lol :P
from what i read from that message and your aurthor's note is that, that person was angry for you making it Sasu/Naru.
I was thinking "is that all, geez people can be such babies sometimes" personally i was very disappointed that Naruto choose Sasuke too. But i also realize after i got over my grief (which was a few minutes) that this was your story and you can do whatever you want with it, but I still did not feel right...i guess i'm too into this story of yours lol, I never really laugh like i did with your story, it was new to me and i was happy, i thought to myself that "maybe she's the one" the one to break that silly habbit of when more than one person is...lusting? after Naruto and one of them invovled Sasuke you weren't going to let Naruto choose Sasuke, but you did and what i notice with some of the reviews (i always love reading the reviews to my favorite stories) that you got mixed yet postive remarks about Naruto choice, some people are die-hard Sasu/Naru fans but i'm not, i'm not really much "fond" of Sasuke let alone Sasu/Naru fan...and to see that he did choose Sasuke was alittle hurtful? but that person reviews very completely out of line and no one no matter how bad their story was deserves to have anyone say that there story was "shitty" that was very rude of that person to say, from what i read from your author's note was the person was angry that you made it Sasu/Naru.
hehe i think your a damn good writer to get someone so mad like that from one little choice...genius it's called you know, pure genius ;)
You are now gonna make it that Naruto choose each of them now, but i'm a little "iffy" on reading it seeing that your first choice was Sasu/Naru, i think this is one of the most funniest stories that i have ever read, every chapter until Naruto choice and when that girl was found made me chuckle to say the least....you were on this mountain to me climbing up, every chapter was greater than the last on...very rare to me in the stories i read....that you came to this stop in my mind when you let Sasuke win....grrrr Sasuke always gets what he wants :P -shakes fist-
it's good that you made that choice now but your first choice for Naruto is imprinted in my mind and i just can't get it out :'(
If i don't read that next chapter you'll hopefully know why, if i don't i want you to know that i really enjoyed this story, i couldn't even eat while reading this b/c in fear of choking on my food while laughing so much lol what a first for me ^_^
i know in my mind that if Gaara or Neji was Naruto first choice i think...hmmm i don't really know b/c it didn't happend :'(
but if i did this would be one of my most favorite stories of Adltfanfiction :)
for now it is and i really hope you make another story just warned me by saying it's a Sasu/Naru in the summary so i dont have to read it ok? ;) i tired of reading Sasuke always winning ~sigh~ oh well...if only i had the talent to write like you :')
great story i really enjoyed it!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Tamara~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
but you did started out making it Sasu/Naru which disappointed me so :'(
it put tears to my eyes lol...tears of saddness of course.
i was just wondering why you put Sasu/Naru first anyways...thinking in the circumstances that stories like your always end up like that (Naruto always choosing Sasuke)
I didn't want to say anything yesterday about Naruto's first and oringal choice b/c you were having problems with that...ahem....."out of line reviewer"
So if you don't mind i'll say what i really wanted to say yesterday....Yesterday i notice alot of chapters and i was thinking "damn where the hell was i when she updated all these chapters" when i last read this story Sasuke's genin was missing when i came back to the story she was found, Naruto made his choice, you had an authors note and a message for that "pissed off reviewer" Me being the Nosey person that i am read the message anyways even though it wasn't for me lol :P
from what i read from that message and your aurthor's note is that, that person was angry for you making it Sasu/Naru.
I was thinking "is that all, geez people can be such babies sometimes" personally i was very disappointed that Naruto choose Sasuke too. But i also realize after i got over my grief (which was a few minutes) that this was your story and you can do whatever you want with it, but I still did not feel right...i guess i'm too into this story of yours lol, I never really laugh like i did with your story, it was new to me and i was happy, i thought to myself that "maybe she's the one" the one to break that silly habbit of when more than one person is...lusting? after Naruto and one of them invovled Sasuke you weren't going to let Naruto choose Sasuke, but you did and what i notice with some of the reviews (i always love reading the reviews to my favorite stories) that you got mixed yet postive remarks about Naruto choice, some people are die-hard Sasu/Naru fans but i'm not, i'm not really much "fond" of Sasuke let alone Sasu/Naru fan...and to see that he did choose Sasuke was alittle hurtful? but that person reviews very completely out of line and no one no matter how bad their story was deserves to have anyone say that there story was "shitty" that was very rude of that person to say, from what i read from your author's note was the person was angry that you made it Sasu/Naru.
hehe i think your a damn good writer to get someone so mad like that from one little choice...genius it's called you know, pure genius ;)
You are now gonna make it that Naruto choose each of them now, but i'm a little "iffy" on reading it seeing that your first choice was Sasu/Naru, i think this is one of the most funniest stories that i have ever read, every chapter until Naruto choice and when that girl was found made me chuckle to say the least....you were on this mountain to me climbing up, every chapter was greater than the last on...very rare to me in the stories i read....that you came to this stop in my mind when you let Sasuke win....grrrr Sasuke always gets what he wants :P -shakes fist-
it's good that you made that choice now but your first choice for Naruto is imprinted in my mind and i just can't get it out :'(
If i don't read that next chapter you'll hopefully know why, if i don't i want you to know that i really enjoyed this story, i couldn't even eat while reading this b/c in fear of choking on my food while laughing so much lol what a first for me ^_^
i know in my mind that if Gaara or Neji was Naruto first choice i think...hmmm i don't really know b/c it didn't happend :'(
but if i did this would be one of my most favorite stories of Adltfanfiction :)
for now it is and i really hope you make another story just warned me by saying it's a Sasu/Naru in the summary so i dont have to read it ok? ;) i tired of reading Sasuke always winning ~sigh~ oh well...if only i had the talent to write like you :')
great story i really enjoyed it!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Tamara~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It will be a lot of work for you, but this is a good idea. I think many people will be please with your idea. I'm going to read everyone thing you will do, I'm a fan of your writing, so keep going your really good job! Take the time you need to write! Ja!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo Ruri, you rock my socks off girl! Show that *bleep*Pissed off Reader where to go and how to get there! The story is awesome and I wanna read more! GAH! Can't wait for the three seperate endings, the anticipation is killin me. I wanna know what's gonna happen! Keep on truckin' have a gr8 New Years, and remember, no one loves flamers, so never let them get to you!
-Sparky the spark master.
-Sparky the spark master.