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for Just Too Sexy For His Own Good

by Ruri

person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter really makes me laugh and sincerly I don't laugh often when I'm reading. It was so funny and great. I really don't understand people who flame you. Your story is one of the best! I know this is a lot of work writing, so I really admire you to update so often. You're doing such a great job. I hope there will be plenty of other good chapters as good or as fun as this one. I'm sure you will come up with another genius idea. Your story is awesome, so keep going please and flame the flamers! (I don't like them!) Ja!
person Mija
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was soooooo priceless...I can just see poor Naru baby getting all beet red while his students try t0 figure out why he walks funny...lmaooo and omg the whole team can HEAR them and they are just laughing..lol I would be too, but shame on Sasuke for laughing, its his FAULT...lmaoo too funny..the got hit in his butt with a doorknob by Rock Lee was good, made me spit water outta my mouth...too funny, loved it, ty for the excellent reads and the updates, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-) btw have a very safe and joyfull New Year...
person cibiboy
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol lol lol that last ch was so funny lol lol update soon
person shinigamigrl
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG....that was FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!! Out of all the lemons I have read...and i've read quite a few...but that is beside the point. You have written the lemon of all lemons. I was practically drooling as Naruto and Sasuke had sex like wild monkeys. It was as if I was there watching. be still be wild yaoi heart. If all your other lemons are like this one I can't wait to read the rest of your story. Now i'm going to go and read that chapter one more time. ^.^
person Jio
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Sasuke loosely but cutely interlocking his fingers with Narutos.

Shit. You made me a fangirl.
person AkaiTsume
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the others, I want to know what's going on in Naruto's head, too. ^_^ I do love the pairings, even if I'm also mainly a NaruSasu shipper. The only problem I've noticed is that in the last chapter, you had Makoto refer to Naruto as Naruto-nee...which is the equivalent of "big sis Naruto." It's supposed to be Naruto-niichan, lol. Other than that, fantastic work, and please don't make us wait too long for an update next time!

-Akai
person AkaiTsume
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoops...wrong story. Please ignore that last review, gomen!

Ok, then, a review for yours!! I normally don't enjoy stories with everyone after Naruto (hypocritical of me, I know, since that's exactly what I wrote), but yours has just been FUN. I love that Naruto got the boys back at their own game, and that he hasn't been just helpless and hopelessly oblivious throughout. I adored seeing Sasuke's warm side when caring over his student, since we so rarely get to see any side of him that isn't uptight and emotionless. I've enjoyed every crumb of your story, and I hope to read more from you. ^_^

-Akai
person Shinori-chan
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You tell him! Assholes like that get me mad. Your story rocks so keep going.Geez, some people just don't friggen get it. Homophobes. I hate people like that. Welll anyway, before I get mad about that since I am a authoress myself, I love your story so you keep doing what you gotta do. Update! Bye!

P.S: Pissed off reader, go suck a *bleep*

~Shinori-chan~
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm really happy that Sasuke and Naruto are together!! I do feel bad for Neji and Gaara..... But, I am glad that they accept the fact that Naruto chose Sasuke. And I like how they still love him and probably always will....... It's cute how they'll keep watchong over him to make sure Sasuke treats him right; which I'm sure Sasuke will....... Anyway. Great chapter!! I hope you update soon!! I love it!!!
person redtatsu
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one am really enjoying your story. I agree, if you don't like the pairing then don't read it. Some peole like to torment others just for their own pleasure to get a rise out of the author. I'm glad your not letting it get to you that much. And I hope it doesn't damped your creativity. So, When is the next chapter going to be out?:)