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Interesting new chapter, would be really cool the see the story turn into an mpreg but well your the author and you do what you want and im very curious to see what it is your going to do. You ask for constructive criticism and I think this would count as it but its a matter of your opinion. There was one part of the story that threw me off and kind of increased my disappointment when you announced the final pairing. I can't remember which chapter it was, but there was a point where Naruto had a conversation with Temari where he told her who he loved and she said something like, "That's unexpected" So I was thinking that the pairing would either be GaaNaru or NejiNaru, because SasuNaru is the obvious, and a bit overused, choice (especially with triangles). I actually can't think of one story where a triangle between Sasuke and either or both of the other two ended with Naruto not picking Sasuke. You raised my hopes up and then crushed them, but oh well. It's not like I hate SasuNaru pairing, I actually do like that pairing a lot, was just hoping for something different. Anyways that's enough of that, your story, you've made your choice. Now I just can't wait to see where your planning to go with the story, because I can't see where it would go beyond this unless you find another storyline (like mpreg....hint hint:D) or maybe you just finish up with the bet and the village's reaction. That's all, I go now, I do like your story and I hope to be seeing a new chapter soon.

You sure know where to put all the good details... ^_^
That was really good! I loved this chapter!

Shadow Girl

Whoa!! AWESOME lemon!! I love this story!! You are a GREAT writer! I'm really addicted to this fic....... Thank you for writing it. I'm glad that Sasuke and Naruto are together. It's a good pairing. No matter what the flamer says, this is a great pairing. And you're right..... it's your story. You can write whatever pairing you like. It's your choice. This fic is written so well...... I love it. Hope you update soon. I can't wait. Sometimes I can't handle long fics, but I read them anyway. But this is a GREAT fic. I'm happy that it's still going. I don't think I can see it ending any time soon..... And I don't think I want it to end any time soon. It's THAT good. Thank you for writing it. Great job. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter!! I love you!!! ^_^

Please don't let the "flamers" discourage you from completing this fanfic. I personally look forward to all of the updates. I love the storyline.

Ruri, you sound sexy when you´re mad ;) FIERCE! I totally support you.

whoa i missed alot of chapters i feel so sad now :(
i'm glad that Sasuke's genin is ok (i forgot her name lol) sorry about that too :P

what i didn't notice is that Sasuke gotten Naruto...~sigh~ Sasuke gets everything lol oh well that can't be helped
poor Neji and Gaara...i hope they don't go together b/c i never understood that pairing, heck they never even talked before lol
oh dear i also read your author's note and the other thing....i just wanna stay that it's good for some authors like you to have a back bone and not quit your story. People can stay cruels things, i just thought it was funny that, that person was not liking Sasu/Naru...rants rants rant...your story lol do what ya want...and do your best

Wow! I love it! It's just great! I've enjoyed it so much! Oh, and I'm so glad Sasuke had won, 'cause I really love SasuNaru pairing! By the way, so good yaoi content, I like it so much, so I hope you write more, ok?! (I know, I'm mad about yaoi XD). At first I felt bad for both Neji and Gaara since they loved Naruto as well, but maybe GaaraNeji pairing is also a good choice. I don't know, do it as you want since it's you story, I'll accept it anyway (well, indeed I like almost all yaoi pairings, even the weirdest XD). The only thing I'd ask for is not to split up our cute couple (I mean SasuNaru, obviosly XD).
Well, I congratulate you for your hard work (since there're few who update so often) and for the whole story! I repeat I love it! And even more: I'm declaring as your fan! XD (and it's something anwonted). So you know, here you've your fans supporting you!
Anyway, good work, and please, update it soon (although I know you're going to do it). See you soon! ;)

Anne

PS: I've just read your last notes about that "bothering reader". I'm not that type of person who usually teases the others works or comments, but this time, since I really love this story and I'm certainly a bit cross (or rather pissed off), I'd like to tell you, bothering reader, that you're the childish one and as Ruri said, if you don't like it, tough shit! The author said from the first the story'd have yaoi content, so since Ruri warned you, now don't start complaining since you haven't the right. If you dislike this sort of content, then just don't read it! Nobody has forcecd you to read it so stop bothering, you i****! Stop flaming and do something more useful! Stop bothering Ruri (and consistently me and the others Ruri's fans) with your silly games!
So you know Ruri, your story is really great, me and lots of people love it. So don't allow that that crap bothers you and go on! Here we're supporting you!

I totally agree with you, those kind of people are really annoying. I meant they can stop reading the story if they don't like it, it is rude to bother others with your *@#$ opinion. Do they even know how hard it is to write a good story? It really piss me off.

darn ur fast! mwauhaha anywayz keep up za gud work

Congrats on telling them off!! You're right, they DON'T have to read this story. I'll never understand why people flame. Constructive criticism is one thing, flames are another. If they don't like the story, then they can go write one of their own the way they want it. Hell, they could even say "I like the idea, but not the pairing.. would you mind making a second ending with this pairing?" I started off writing mainstream stuff, and so long as the plotline's original, it works. Your plot's original enough to make me stay and keep reading. Plus I like Sasu/Naru. lol!! I also like Gaara/Naru and Neji/Naru. But I'm the open-minded type.. odd, huh? I really like your fic, and I'm glad you're going to continue it! I keep checking it every day, hoping there's at least one new chapter. And also, yes, it's your fic. YOU decide how you wanna write it, and YOU decide what reviews you wanna keep. If anyone's being childish, it's them, for actually coming back after they already flamed.. I mean, seriously... Anyway!! Hope you update soon!! My birthday's coming up in 4 days.. maybe as a gift for me? C'mon!! Please?! I'll be your best friend!!