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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful,just wonderful.More sophisticated then usual what with the historical background,lack of pretention or over wrought emotion.It was a cool tease,I kept expecting violence to happen.Haku's pragmaticism and Kakashi's(your) witty use song foreshadowed the unwapped tea house boy.It flowed past with grace,so quickly though it did not diappoint.I appreciated Zabuza's inner conflict and rather gracious surrender holding an armful of boy.Very hot. It did seem the tiniest bit incomplete but I could not tell you why..perhaps because it whets one's appetite for motto.Thank you.I have to go and chase down more of your ficcage!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Mahvelous, fic. Lurved it vedy much. Finally, another fic with Zabuza paired wit someone else other den Haku. Not enough fics like dat out thurr. Brilliant job, dahling. ^_^ Zabu/Kaka=one of mah fave pairings! Woot! A threesome jus' made it smexier. >:3
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I really love your writing style, and the threesome couldn't have been better! There are hardly any stories with Zabuza and when I read Kakashi I was like HUZZAAH! So sleazy, but warm. Hope you continue to write, I'd love to read more of your stuff!