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DAMN YOU. I've read all this way 8 years later only to come to a stop before reading about some really hot boy sex. Come on!!!!

dudette.............yummy!!!

keep going! want more!

OMG!!! This was great!!! Kyuubi was sooooo right, now Naruto owes him one >333

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Holy SH*T!!! You actually got me to enjoy reading a Sasuke/Naruto pairing!! And I hate Sasuke! But I luv the Sasuke in your story! He's still broody, but something about the way you've portrayed him in your work, I like him! And he's such a cute little perv!XD So far this has been such an awesome fic with the sweet chapters about the cute twin pup girls that have the boys wrapped around their little fingers, and of course Naruto has just been so himself cool, but with your touch of cuteness that I don't blame Sasuke for wanting to molest him. And I luv Temari and Hinata together and that you have it that she smells like lavender and 'nilla, something sexy and calming at the same time 'cause she's such a hot little shy nin that I don't blame Temari for not keeping her hands off Hinata. I'm glad my sis read this and told me about it, I couldn't not read it after hearing about Naruto taking care of the cute twins, and after reading it, my dislike of Sasuke would have prevented me from enjoying such a sweet story. So I can't wait for later chapters. ^-^!!

Yeah, real good story, please update soon. It's been months since you did a new chapter for this...

(and could you add some TemXHina smut in the next chapter? Pretty please...???)

awsome loved it this is now one of my favorites ;D

(im a girl just so you know)

You don't know me but....*SQUEELS* OMIG!!! ^0^ *glomps you* I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! X3 AND....EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! YAY!!! THE YAOINESS!!!! XP rofl! XD XD XD Don't mind me....^_^;; crazed yaoi fangirl over here....lol XP I love you story so much! *takes deep breath* ^-^ ok I'm done! lol XD

You really have quite a way with your stories, lol

YES!! I thought that was very funny when temari said "JACKPOT" that was to DIE for!! I am known for telling ppl to write sooner and i will work my magic on u to WRITE SONNER AND FINISH THIS INTOXICATING STORY!!