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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please send me an email when you update this story. I really like what you have done so far.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sigh...oh well. I really liked this fic when i found it two months ago and have been coming back to it from time to time, which i dont do very often with other fics. I really hope you will update it in time, cause i dont want it to be another fic in the trash! I hope your still reading your reviews and i hope you'll have enough time in your life to add another chapter. Take care!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just want to say u spelt Kyuubi wrong in your summary u might want to change that
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I really like this story! If it's not too much trouble, could you please email me when it's updated? My email's sakura underscore laurel 6 6 6 at yahoo dot com. Thanks!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awesome story. I like how you're not ignoring a bunch of stuff from the actual story and stuff, wickedness. Update?
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story I was wondering if you could e-mail me when the next one comes out. Please?
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely stoer when are you going to finish it.
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the word is KIT no kitling baby fox are call kits not kitling get it right
but other than that you have a great story line keep up the work and remember KIT not kitling
but other than that you have a great story line keep up the work and remember KIT not kitling
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am used to always be blunt about things. i hope you will not be angry. but i want to state that this is NOT a flame, but a constructive review.
at first, i thought this fic would be merely another one of those super!naruto, where he's trained by kyuubi, who out of the blue starts to act like amother hen and such, and i found it unpleasant. but i never stop at the first chapter of a fic because I can be proven wrong.
and though yours IS a fic with naruto trained by a kinda mother hen-ish kyuubi, i still find the plot rather pleasant, and I like the fic nonetheless. i know that such words may be a kick on your pride, (believe me, I have got many bad mouthings in my life, and none was about my writing or fic, but merely insults at my likings, such as yaoi. so, this is NOT a flame and I would like you to not think it as such) but i want to make clear that you're still a good author, and you can write wonderfully.
i hope naruto won't turn into an all-powerful-no-one-is-ever-gonna-beat-me guy, because that would completely ruin this fic, and I admit i would prefer this to turn into a wonderful piece of art, since you have the premises to end like it. [i also have to admit, having naruto beat sasuke into a piece of crap was damn satisfacting... ^^ even if sasuke is better off as SEME with naruto. uke!naruto is my love]
up to now, apart the training thing, this is promising, very promising. having sasuke henge into naruto is actually not cliché, it's really unused, and using that to make sasuke understand is genial. because whilst sasukenaruto can be taken to a new level, you still have to take into account the fact that naruto for how strong, is and can't be unbeatable. that would make him a mary-sue OOC, which is not good [i admit many like to make him super!powerful because in the series he's not enough so, but that would make him less naruto, thus not the chara we all love. power and strength are to be earned and learned through time and training, as i hope you will be doing instead of going all i-learn-so-fast-i-am-so-perfect many others end up doing].
so i hope you won't be angered by this, since i want to make clear what i liked and what i didn't (and what ididn't like, it's only because I am kinda against obvious cliché), and this fic attracted my attention. i want you to continue writing, and i will keep on enjoying and reviewing. this is not a flame, and i accept thefact that maybe you won't share my view on cliché and what is not.
if i have insulted you in any way with this review, please let me know, because it is not what i wanted. i hold strong expectations for this fic and i am sure I will love it as it goes on. you have a very good way to put down emotions and such, so minor details like super!powerful can be ignored... (up to a certain point)
Ceph
at first, i thought this fic would be merely another one of those super!naruto, where he's trained by kyuubi, who out of the blue starts to act like amother hen and such, and i found it unpleasant. but i never stop at the first chapter of a fic because I can be proven wrong.
and though yours IS a fic with naruto trained by a kinda mother hen-ish kyuubi, i still find the plot rather pleasant, and I like the fic nonetheless. i know that such words may be a kick on your pride, (believe me, I have got many bad mouthings in my life, and none was about my writing or fic, but merely insults at my likings, such as yaoi. so, this is NOT a flame and I would like you to not think it as such) but i want to make clear that you're still a good author, and you can write wonderfully.
i hope naruto won't turn into an all-powerful-no-one-is-ever-gonna-beat-me guy, because that would completely ruin this fic, and I admit i would prefer this to turn into a wonderful piece of art, since you have the premises to end like it. [i also have to admit, having naruto beat sasuke into a piece of crap was damn satisfacting... ^^ even if sasuke is better off as SEME with naruto. uke!naruto is my love]
up to now, apart the training thing, this is promising, very promising. having sasuke henge into naruto is actually not cliché, it's really unused, and using that to make sasuke understand is genial. because whilst sasukenaruto can be taken to a new level, you still have to take into account the fact that naruto for how strong, is and can't be unbeatable. that would make him a mary-sue OOC, which is not good [i admit many like to make him super!powerful because in the series he's not enough so, but that would make him less naruto, thus not the chara we all love. power and strength are to be earned and learned through time and training, as i hope you will be doing instead of going all i-learn-so-fast-i-am-so-perfect many others end up doing].
so i hope you won't be angered by this, since i want to make clear what i liked and what i didn't (and what ididn't like, it's only because I am kinda against obvious cliché), and this fic attracted my attention. i want you to continue writing, and i will keep on enjoying and reviewing. this is not a flame, and i accept thefact that maybe you won't share my view on cliché and what is not.
if i have insulted you in any way with this review, please let me know, because it is not what i wanted. i hold strong expectations for this fic and i am sure I will love it as it goes on. you have a very good way to put down emotions and such, so minor details like super!powerful can be ignored... (up to a certain point)
Ceph