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for Wouldn't You Like To Know

by WaterShadow

person JadeTiger
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I never heard that thing about prickly pears... i had one for breakfast the other morning and it didn't bother me any.
oh ya, and update soon!
person Lanier
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot, that was a great chapter. I love how you had the first part going. Man you had me going there for a while. I am really glad you are writting and I wanted to say I am sorry to hear about your aunt and uncle. I am glad that you can have a laugh for him though. I cant wait to see more.
person wraithguardstar
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, keep it up~

though, it Is possible to have night-long sex. I've done it. Silicon lube fixes the ladies friction problem when applied correctly (not too little, not too much) and as for hydration, keep a bottle by the bed~ Guys, if you ever see a Large water bottle by your girls bed, that means she's prepared, hop to.
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...! Where have you been all my life? Why did I not find you sooner? Nevermind... I shall commence stalking you now. I'm sure I'll be able to catch up with all your other works soon enough. (cue evil laugh)

I'm loving this so far... easy to read, and I really can't help but admire and adore your style. It's... intelligent. I'm not sure how to describe it. Not exactly satirical, but the sarcasm is definitely there--with every chapter leaving me with a stupid (yet not undesirable) grin on my face. My favourite kind of reading. Definitely. But apart from that, I also happen to completely agree with you. I'm all for SasuNaru, however, I do not believe, like you said, that a night of hot, sexy boy-love is going to erase all the pain, hurt and very obvious emotional trauma both boys have faced. Hell, unless there's some sort of emotional epiphany (which would take a while considering how both of them ARE) beforehand, how they even get to that night of hot, sexy boy-love is a mystery to me. (Which is why I can't seem to write canonical fics, no matter how hard I try.) Another thing that bothers me and which I find completely unrealistic is the fact that I've read a lot of fics that have them "realizing" their feelings for each other AFTER what apparently was the hottest sex of their lives...

Uh.

Riiight.

... Uhm. I'm going off at a tangent now... ANYway... moving on. What was my point? Oh... yes. I adore the way the story is going (don't listen to anyone who says otherwise!) and I'm hoping that you update... soon. No... sooner than soon. Please.

*runs off to read your other fics while waiting for an update*
(Yeah... I know I sound like I have way too much free time on my hands... but... to be frank, that isn't entirely true; I just happen to be very good at MAKING free time, that's all. Yup.)
person sara
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hilarious! i luved it keep up the comedy
person lanier
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I havent kept up to date with your story. I am so glad to see a new chapter. It was awesome as usual and of course I cannot wait to see the next one.
person Lanier
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I am sorry I didnt get to read it right away. I love Sasuke's little talks with himself. They are quite interesting. I also found it quite funny that he was eavesdropping on the two girls. *snickers* I cant wait to see more.
person losthimagain
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me like please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

-The Update Monster
person tariray
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i looooooooooooooooooove it!!!
*drools and runs off to work*
person tariray
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeeease continue this is sooooooooooooooo awesome.
wow,
a partially sane review for once huh?
or...not...?