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That was a great chapter. I think the tendancy is there to write angsty and dark fics when it comes to many of the male characters. Naruto and Sasuke especially, because of their history in pain. It may be a constant struggle to keep them happy because you wouldnt necessarily expect a real person who had gone through what they have, to be overly happy generaly. I would love to see a dark angsty fic from you too though. Anyway, enough of my endless psycho babble. As always I enjoy your insight into the personalities of the characters. I cant wait for more, even if I do have to wait.

Yay, an update! I really like the way your fics show slowly developing emotions. It makes it more realistic. Cookies and flowers to you.

great chappy, i'm sure you are very busy with school so thanks so much for the update. i personally like how you wrote naruto's character, to me it seemed very on character. i also like how you put some of what you feel are kyuubi's traits coming through in naruto. i agree one would think some of kyuubi's traits would come through especially since after the time jump it seems the maybe naruto isn't as seperate from the kyuubi as one would think. especially since the seal allows for chakra to come through, plus with naruto being able to contact the fox i think it would lead to more of a merger between them. looking forward to your next installment, can't wait to see what you do with them next.

I like it and please write more!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster

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still on my knees (whose bones are going crusty inthe mud)
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Well for whatever reason you wrote it, I am very glad you did. That was hystarical. I can acutually see it happening. Great chapter. I cant wait to see what else you come up with.

Happy New Year! Glad to see you've returned! *whispers 'me, i'm still in hiding. you see noooothing.* Ah, the lovely slow boil treatment, this time unleashed on Sasuke and Naruto. Mmm. Fab. The third chapter had me grinning in wincing sympathy. I've got the official Naruto data books, and there's a pic of Sasuke in his late teens. Seriously. Uber. Hot. If you want me to scan and flick it to you, just say the word... Anyway... As I said on your other fic, I love a story that looks at a series and casts a fresh eye over its facets. (I try to do it with my own. When I'm not suffering writers block, gah.) The way you wrote the two interacting, the snarking perfectly in keeping, the very plausible outcome of high-end ninjas having stalkers... bloody brilliant.

Ack, must dash. Deeply looking forward to how you clue them both in...

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Continue, please. It's always fun to read your stories, 'cause you always have so good thoughts about everything. ^^

Cool and I can't wait for an update!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really want to know what's going on!!!!!!!!! I'm so confused!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster

it's wonderful to see more of your work. can't wait to see where you take us this time. personally i really like the whole sas/naru pairing, i think they suit one another very well. glad to see your going to take things slow with them as well, i agree naruto's character has been through so much and has been alone for so long i don't really think that he'd get alot when it came to romance or even relationships. but, that is just my take on it. happy new years!!