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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You'd better make a sequel/companion piece/second chapter....*flexes and cracks knuckles*..........that was a loooong one shot, but I really liked it I don't usually go for the Sasuke/Naruto pairing, but this one was good...maybe I should read 'em more often huh?.....anyway great oneshot nice and hot *fans self* with a splash 'o' fluffiness!!!!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*flushes* that was hotttttt just now...hehe, plz continue the story!! i really wanna see naruto's reaction!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am severly disappointed that NO ONE decided to review this fic, especially the Sasu/Naru fans.
Believe me, this has got to be one of the greatest Naruto lemons I've ever read, as well as the longest ^^. Very nicely detailed and I really loved the plot on how you've started this fic. Just a simple problem on Naruto stuck on the tire swing and things lead to a more intimate scene... Original and excellent! ^^
I hope you'll at least continue on with this fic as a multi chapter, but its a one shot, then I guess I'll leave up to my imgaination to see what'll happen the next day. ^^ It's really good and I love how the way your describe everything in an intricate detail, as well as how you've realy managed to keep Sasuke and Naruto right into their same personalities (I'm sure Sasuke would really act like that if he desires after Naruto.).
Heck, I believe your lemon scene is far 100 times better than mine, which shows you've really got great writing talent and skills. ^^ Well, I hope this fic will receive a lot more reviews after this, and please continue on with this fic! I know it will be a MAJOR success if you do! Until then we see each other again in one of your greatest works...
-Elk
p.s- In case if you created another S/N fic, email me at bombay_229@hotmail.com and I'll be sure to review!
Believe me, this has got to be one of the greatest Naruto lemons I've ever read, as well as the longest ^^. Very nicely detailed and I really loved the plot on how you've started this fic. Just a simple problem on Naruto stuck on the tire swing and things lead to a more intimate scene... Original and excellent! ^^
I hope you'll at least continue on with this fic as a multi chapter, but its a one shot, then I guess I'll leave up to my imgaination to see what'll happen the next day. ^^ It's really good and I love how the way your describe everything in an intricate detail, as well as how you've realy managed to keep Sasuke and Naruto right into their same personalities (I'm sure Sasuke would really act like that if he desires after Naruto.).
Heck, I believe your lemon scene is far 100 times better than mine, which shows you've really got great writing talent and skills. ^^ Well, I hope this fic will receive a lot more reviews after this, and please continue on with this fic! I know it will be a MAJOR success if you do! Until then we see each other again in one of your greatest works...
-Elk
p.s- In case if you created another S/N fic, email me at bombay_229@hotmail.com and I'll be sure to review!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools* Grr its so good. How did you get so good at writing *cough cough* these stories, very smexy! I really hope you have follow up chapter(s). I want to know about Naruto's reactions to all of this. Thx for the story.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What an excellent story! I do so hope that this isn't a one-shot, because this story...wow..! Your style of writing is awesome and I hope you write more!
-Ruri
-Ruri
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! this was really good one of the best I've read, I hope you continue^_^