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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story completely.
Do not mind me as I vent the fact that a really good story like yours isn't finished when KakaSaku (or just plain Kakashi...Sakura isn't completely necessary as long as the guy isn't paired with anyone else) obsessed little me is up at one in the morning, getting in the last few bits of enjoyable fanfiction before scholarly hell decides to take me.
Other than that, it was great, please write more soon!!
Please email me when you get the next chapter up?
Do not mind me as I vent the fact that a really good story like yours isn't finished when KakaSaku (or just plain Kakashi...Sakura isn't completely necessary as long as the guy isn't paired with anyone else) obsessed little me is up at one in the morning, getting in the last few bits of enjoyable fanfiction before scholarly hell decides to take me.
Other than that, it was great, please write more soon!!
Please email me when you get the next chapter up?
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...things I forgot to mention!!
Who were those people Kiba spotted? Will anyone ELSE stumble upon the field of vanilla? Where do Shino and Naruto figure in all of this KibaSakuKaka triangle currently? I have to agree with Inner Sakura on quite a lot of things...like being chased by four delicious guys!! Of course...if you're sticking to one for life I'm biased in my opinions.
Despite my being a KakaSaku fan (and being Kakashi-obsessed...you know what MY choice would be if the four of them were after me), I now have a healthy respect for all your pairings in this one. It's to the point where I won't feel overly bad if Kakashi ISN'T the one she chooses in the end. Even Shino (whom i had to warm up to in both the manga and anime) and Kiba won't be bad. Now, please excuse me, I must detour to the bathroom to douse my head in cold water before going to sleep.
Who were those people Kiba spotted? Will anyone ELSE stumble upon the field of vanilla? Where do Shino and Naruto figure in all of this KibaSakuKaka triangle currently? I have to agree with Inner Sakura on quite a lot of things...like being chased by four delicious guys!! Of course...if you're sticking to one for life I'm biased in my opinions.
Despite my being a KakaSaku fan (and being Kakashi-obsessed...you know what MY choice would be if the four of them were after me), I now have a healthy respect for all your pairings in this one. It's to the point where I won't feel overly bad if Kakashi ISN'T the one she chooses in the end. Even Shino (whom i had to warm up to in both the manga and anime) and Kiba won't be bad. Now, please excuse me, I must detour to the bathroom to douse my head in cold water before going to sleep.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well if you are going to write it any way and it does not interfer with Sakura's story, I say go for it. I love this story. I want her first time with Kakashi, then who ever you want. Or all of them, I don't care.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I know I skipped a few chapters in here, pbut I'll review this one (7) and the rest, then review 8 when I hit it.
GO KAKASHI! I agree with Inner Sakura, he's so damn cool! ^_^ Your characterization of him (and everyone else) makes me so very, very happy. Also, great work detailing information on the hand signs, seals, etc. You added just the right amount of info to give it good solidity.
Hm, we haven't seen much of Naruto. Must be because Sakura's been avoiding him. Poor guy. Oh well, this is her show not his! I did like the differences of how Shino approached her as opposed to Kiba and Naruto. Nice to know he's not just a jacket full of bugs. XD And "yum yum" for the kiss.
Great work!I really like this fic and how it's progressing. Keep it up!
GO KAKASHI! I agree with Inner Sakura, he's so damn cool! ^_^ Your characterization of him (and everyone else) makes me so very, very happy. Also, great work detailing information on the hand signs, seals, etc. You added just the right amount of info to give it good solidity.
Hm, we haven't seen much of Naruto. Must be because Sakura's been avoiding him. Poor guy. Oh well, this is her show not his! I did like the differences of how Shino approached her as opposed to Kiba and Naruto. Nice to know he's not just a jacket full of bugs. XD And "yum yum" for the kiss.
Great work!I really like this fic and how it's progressing. Keep it up!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo-hoo! Hot make-out session! XD I'm with InnerSakura, with all these hot guys going after her, so long as she gets some action, whocarewho it's from? Only,well, there's that problem of "do it once and you're stuck with this guy for life". Oops.
Hmm, now why was the vanilla there? Who were the two figures that Kiba detected before he went all horny and predetory? Will Sakura get more hot make-out sessions in the near future? Somany important questions.
Bonus for Sakura being cool and defending herself while she could (and wanted to), and another bonus fo rmentioning Haku in a sense not related to Naruto or Sasuke or "precious people". ^_^
As for Ino's story... Only start posting it if it's some how far removed from Sakura's. Don't want to start confusing the two, time-wise. I.E. Ino's covering all the times Sakura is not around. Of course, you DID mention Ino already having someone going after her...heh. ^.^ Whatever you choose, I'll definately read it. I like your style!
Hmm, now why was the vanilla there? Who were the two figures that Kiba detected before he went all horny and predetory? Will Sakura get more hot make-out sessions in the near future? Somany important questions.
Bonus for Sakura being cool and defending herself while she could (and wanted to), and another bonus fo rmentioning Haku in a sense not related to Naruto or Sasuke or "precious people". ^_^
As for Ino's story... Only start posting it if it's some how far removed from Sakura's. Don't want to start confusing the two, time-wise. I.E. Ino's covering all the times Sakura is not around. Of course, you DID mention Ino already having someone going after her...heh. ^.^ Whatever you choose, I'll definately read it. I like your style!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter - love how Kakashi intercepted that 'moment' between sakura and kiba. haha go kakashi!!
anyway, about the Ino thing - I don't personally like her, but if you were to put her in the story, I'd vote for doing her part AFTER Sakura. It would just be less confusing ;)
anyway, about the Ino thing - I don't personally like her, but if you were to put her in the story, I'd vote for doing her part AFTER Sakura. It would just be less confusing ;)
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2 stories in the Bestial universe...funness! Kakashi sure has gotten more than his share of "examining" Sakuras chest. Should have it memorized by now eh? Seriously loving this story...I swear some days I have my own inner Sakura to contend with, manages to get me in trouble at times. Cant wait till the next chapter!
Hmm...if you start and post the Ino one Ill sure read it...but if you decide to wait until you finish Bestial than that works too.
Hmm...if you start and post the Ino one Ill sure read it...but if you decide to wait until you finish Bestial than that works too.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked cool chapter! Can't wait for the next one, and please get it out soon.
~WolfYoukaiRin
~WolfYoukaiRin
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story line.
I cracks me up so much, Sooooooo by any chance are we going to see Kakashi's control slip? Just a little tiny bit?
Any way keep going I can't wait for the next chapter.
I cracks me up so much, Sooooooo by any chance are we going to see Kakashi's control slip? Just a little tiny bit?
Any way keep going I can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn. *L* I can tell this is going to be an interesting fic. You have a wonderful writing style, very easy and pleasant to read. I really like your Sakura, she's got spunk and attitude, yet keeps her feminine side. Excellent characterization all around, I look forward to reading the rest of the fic!