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by CoiledIris

person jennjennr
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it i just started reading it... sorry i kinda ignored it at first.. but its really great. please continue i can't wait to see what happens, it all so exciting. about the vote... i'm not sure i'm thinking to wait after sakura's story, so it gets updated sooner :. but thats just me being selfish :) anyway please continue and update as soon as you can.
person tixylix
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well the good news is ff.net sent the reminder this time
the bad news it wont let me review cos aparently i've already reviewed...
i haven't
i checked
anyway i can't wait for kakashi's reaction please please please!! let him be jealous!!
person krickets
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!
kiba is such a stud in this story
you know you dont see enough kiba/saku

hey...i understand that this isnt a sasu/saku but does he show up at all?


also i would wait for the Ino story but if you wanna start writing it thats fine it makes it easier to post later and you should right somthing when your in the mood and not wait

plus it gives you time to perfect it
person Leslie
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I want Kakashi to teach her all that she needs to know. There are to many possibilites with him.
person Aya
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. I think you should wait til you finish Sakura's story then go to Ino's.
person dani
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was very very good i wanna read more but theres no more chapters plz write more
person Valkyrie
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! That was hot! I love how she's even into Kakashi now. Is he having a difficult time struggling with his "inner urges" too? Hee! I love the Kakashi! Anyway, this has got to be my favorite Naruto story. Congrats! You must keep going! And for the love of the beautiful Uchiha Itachi, please update soon!
person TACO
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is certinally interesting. I must say that I enjoy it very much. Also, the mentionings of Gaara gave me a fangirl moment. Rather silly, really, that I am such a GaaSaku (Gaara and Sakura) fan. But that is besides the point. From the options presented within your story so far I think Sakura should choose Kiba. Not that I have anything against the others, quite the opposite really. I find myself unable to give a reason besides a gut feeling. Regardless, the make out session in the woods was very pleasing. Thank you for being such a frequent updater.
person aoshi4misao
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I want to know what happens. Good job so far though, this is a new concept to me, I wouldn't have thought of something like this affecting ninja, but you make it worth reading! I'll be looking for the updates because this is getting good, and I want to know what happens.
person Karista
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't believe I waited this long to read! Excellent story, and no actual smut content (yet?)! Good enough to read for the plot alone, very original and well thought out, but the sexual tension ever so often just gives a greater incentive to keep reading. Very well written, I love the first person perspective. Keep going, this one's going on my rec. reading list so I can keep track of it!