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Hi!
I really liked this story. You are a good writer and this fic has an interesting plot. I also liked youre another story. I'm looking forward to read more about Sasuke's plan B:)

kyaaaaa~~~~! omg, I'm like grinning myself to death here! so fun! so cute! so adorable! so........ kyaaaaaaaa~~~~!!

...sorry, I'm turning into a mindless puddle here, and I'm having difficulties with coherency... anyways, what I wanted to say was "GREAT JOB!! REALLY! keep up the amazing work! and PLEASE, for the love of god, UPDATE SOON~~~~!!!!! or I will die. no kidding", or something along those lines.. ^^;

if you'll excuse me, I have some mindless sloshing to do now. 's hard, being a puddle....

I am so freaking happy that you've udated this fic. This chapter was absolutely phenomenal. I love it and I'm so glad that Sasuke has people to help him out. Please update soon.

YAY~ you updated! *in happiness* I love Sasuke *ahem* Natsumi-chan! quite devious, and totally in love! poor Naruto, he's going to get the ride of his life. and Kyuubi-kun is totally PWN.

I'm really sorry to hear about your mother, that must have been tough. I hope you're holding out ok, I know all too well how much it hurts to lose a family member so unexpectedly. If you ever want to talk (even though we don't really each other) I'd be more then willing to listen :3

Oh. My. God. I love this story to DEATH. It's like friggin crack to me. I read it a few weeks ago and it's been burnning a hole in my head ever since, I'm SUPER glad you updated, just after my birthday too. Best present ever!! I have to say, I love the way you've portrayed the relationship Naruto and Sasuke have, I've read a lot of fics and this one has my favourite connection so far. Can't wait until the next update ^^ I suffer without my weekly fix of fics.

*snickering like mad* You know you're in trouble when something in your own head plots against you to set you up.

I really like this story so far. Please add another chapter soon!

It was really worth the wait even if the wait have been caused by such tragic events. But that's life for you... You never know what will happen and when it does take such sorrowful turns.. it hurts. You have my sympathy. Although Sasuke is acting OOC I don't mind it at all - in fact I think it's funny and refreshing. And I like Sakura's role here too. And Kyuubi - the rascal... *lol* He's funny. I will look forward to when the next chapter comes along.

Hmmm.

I'm two-sided on this story. On the one hand, it's incredibly amusing.

But on the other hand, Tsunade, Sakura and Sasuke are all very horribly out of character.

It is a very big deal for a male to give up their masculinity, especially in a Japanese world, and I think just think it was done a bit unrealisticly here. Perhaps build up Sasuke's feeling a bit more? His love for Naruto seems a bit random, and it's not very convincing.

I do not think, amusing as that part was, that Tsunade would want to hear all the naughty things Sasuke wanted to do to Naruto. I think she would be rather irked if Sakura and Sasuke came to her office just to tell her that Sasuke was in love with Naruto. And she would probably kick them out, and rub her temples all "wtf".

I think it's also a bit unrealistic that Naruto, who has had an unwavering crush on Sakura, would suddenly think so much of a new girl he just met. Also, if "Natsumi" is Sakura's friend from the Mist, how would Sakura have known her at all? Konoha and Mist do not get along very well. It would be highly unlikely that even Naruto would fall for that lie. Perhaps change Mist to Suna, at least those two nations are allies, and Sakura has spent some time in Suna.

Even in girl form, remember that Sasuke is still Sasuke. He has no experience acting like a girl. Even if he is doing it for Naruto, chances are that he would be incredibly stiff and even make it a point to call Naruto an idiot by accident.

I think those were my main points about this fic. You have potential, and your grammar is relatively decent. Just work a bit more on your plots.

wow..i'm amazed! absolutly great story! superb i'm speechless.. please update soon...hope it's going to be a happy ending :D :P good luck with your writting!.

It's cool but... hurry up with the next chapter! I'm begging here! *goes slightly insane*