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by SakuraHaruno23

person Jake The Flake
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great I LOVED IT
person ce
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think that was pertty funny, hope to see more of you work soon.

see ya
person Kamico5642
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person losthimagain
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was cute!!!!!!!!!!! I love the fact the Naruto was watching Sponge Bob Squarepants!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That sounds like something he would do in his spare time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loves!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha :p sasuke didn;t do his work afterall! you should watch out though; you forgot the punctuation xp work on that! CX XD
person Ash-chan
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept and story plot (even if it's PWP). Just work a little bit on your grammar. ^_^ Well, nice story. Ja ne!
person Sukara
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhh...need work...everything seemed rushed..and "our's"? Don't you meand "Hours". xD It was alright...I guess...but still needs lots of work! D:
person gigi1o1
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHERONE!!!!PLEASE MAKE THAT ONE LONGERXD
person gigi1o1
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHERONE!!!!PLEASE MAKE THAT ONE LONGERXD
person cibiboy
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O that so sweet