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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome first chapter. Please continue it, I'd loved this chapter. Ja!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story, I really enjoyed it. I think it is funny how you used 'Believe It' instead of Dattebayo. :) A little adaptation of the English dubbed Anime. Great job!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very sweet!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! You're my god.! That was so good. Everything was just so.. cute :D <3 loved it all the way. I wouldn't mind even if there wasn't an seaqul, because it was just great, but i'd still love to read more of this story. Keep up the good work and write more in the future! :D
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon happy 2006
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet. A few spelling errors, but over all good.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes yes.. CONTINUE IT!! xD suck a cute story.. cute couple.. annoying adults.. *bleh* hehe..
love it.. =3
love it.. =3
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww. That was soooo cute!!! I love it! I think it would be nice if you continued the story..... It's so cute!! Update soon!! I love you!!!!!! <33333 ^_^
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sad and cute at the same time. :] I liked the story. But it was quite annoying when he kept saying "believe it" during the story. It reminded me of the American version of Naruto where he kept saying believe it. Japanese version was better. Neways...good story. =]